Gringo
by hanae

Comment:
Sharp focus, good composition. The shadow created by the hat's brim could have been lightened a bit, but a great shot. Good Luck

Ela
by Chiaroscuro

Comment:
Good lighting, good cropping and positioning of your model's head. She has a great smile and you should do well.

Sunny Day Portrait
by treyvus

Comment:
Great portrait. Sharp focus and good tonality. The pose seems a little forced but overall a really good photo. Great job.

sherlyn
by osuarez

Comment:
Good focus on her face and hand, great use of DOF to blur arm and body. Great facial expression. I love that look. Good luck.

luminous
by photokariangel

Comment:
This is unique and Surreal. Razor sharp focus and your decision to go B&W makes her look artificial. Great job and good luck.

Mmmmwwaa
by kwiktor

Comment:
Although I rated you high ( E for EFFORT), The overall composition seems a bit erratic. You took the time to place your lights, pose your model, prepare the background, match dress color to blend in with background and yet her hair, facial expression, facial shadows, hair protruding from her chin seem all wrong and bothersome. Good luck.

Regal
by DistantColours

Comment:
Sharp focus and well lit. Typical studio portrait. You did a very good job with this photo.

My Lover and Best Friend....
by Patrick_R

Comment:
Her eyes are very pretty and alluring. I like the way you isolated your subject by blurring the background. This is very good and should do well. Good Luck

"Tash"
by Crafty

Comment:
This is a good; sharp focus and good choice of subject. The lighting could have been better. It seems a bit flat or over exposed in some ares of the face. Her chin losses definition and seems to disappear into her neck. I still rated you high because it is overall a good portrait. Good luck.

Isabella
by bspurgeon

Comment:
Very nicely composed picture and I love her pose. She is absolutely adorable. I think it is slightly overexposed though. I believe you should do well. Good job!!!