c o t t o n
by Ja-9

Comment:
Good day from the critique club...

Interesting shot... Looks very vintage in black and white ( I know b& w challenge). In a way it looks like grandmas kitchen table. I am worried about the amount of grain in this shot. I think I would have left some grain but I would have dialed it back a but.

I hope that I have helped you out....

Modern design
by clickodak

Comment:
Good day from the comment club.

Overall this is an OK shot. Not great but just OK. I think it would be much better if the sidewalk ramp was more centered in the shot. As far as the black and white aspect...... I like it. The colors and lighting I feel are spot on.

I hope this critique has helped you out. Keep it up....

Message edited by author 2014-08-26 20:17:56.

Unconventional
by Dr.Confuser

Comment:
Good Day from the critique club

I understand that you are not into still life shots as mentioned in your comments. However, I really think that you did a very nice job. The composition was nicely done. The choice of material (props) used was perfect for a black and white in my opinion. However I think I would have wanted the clock more centered in the frame. To me it is only slightly distracting.

The wood grain in this shot is awesome. I love the way it almost pops out at you. It gives depth, which is always a good thing.

I hope this critique has helped. Keep it up.

subtle
by Tiberius

Comment:
Nice pov

International Orange
by EstimatedEyes

Comment:
Love the water...and the lighting. Nice Orange color

Sisters
by P-A-U-L

Comment:
nice editing

Light Framing
by Neil

Comment:
Nice capture....I like the gold tones in the rock

Supper
by beatabg

Comment:
Good shot...poor execution. I love the composure. Nice subject...However the sun was not in your favor. The sunspot in the middle of the frame is highly distracting. You have also lost detail in the trees. I have started experimenting with an ND filter you may give it a try for a similar shot

Tree of life
by hrefnalind

Comment:
I think the light is a bit harsh.

Iridescence
by matchpoint

Comment:
I love the colors