Bentley
by Chinabun

Comment:
Very well captured details. i see what you tried to do with the background color to complement the gold items on the watch, but to me it doesn't really work. Something in the silver or bluish tones might have made the watch stand ou more... I don't know. Also, the center composition seems to be missing something for me. Overall well done. Good luck!

One Gucci is never enough
by Steveinnz

Comment:
nice use of the two complementary colors. The composition and lighting is missing some 'humf' in there... The white bgr migth be better if it was indeed white (without the yellowish cast on it). good luck!

Dali's Earrings
by labuds

Comment:
Simple and very effective. Love the curves and the composition. I don't know yet how to react to the double shadows... I guess that's good! ;-) good job!

Southwestern
by vtruan

Comment:
Interesting jewel. Nice use of DOF. Annoying fonts sorry. Lighting could use some finesse to create mood. Good luck. well done.

Ocean's Mystery Bracelet
by Sonda

Comment:
Interesting idea. Nice use of silhouette and mirror effect. I find the composition to be a bit odd and the jewel uninspiring. Font is annoying to me, sorry. Good job overall. Good luck!

MAMBA
by aznym

Comment:
Love the lines. Excellent choice of font and font color. Composition might have worked a bit better if the front end of the jewel was placed with an angle instead of a straight horizontal line... Good work!

Forever Ice
by Matthew

Comment:
Good idea! Unfortunately, I do not think this shot in particular works. I can imagine how hard it must be to capture the right shot. A+ for effort, that's for sure!

Defining Beauty
by arnit

Comment:
Here's a good example of a shot with great potential that needs just a touch of tweeking to make it really work. Cropping very close to the model might help in this case; there's just too much negative space to support this beautiful pose. Also, the lettering of "cartier" is way too big and distracting. I'd also revise the color for the font and possibly go with a very light gold that would reflect her hair. Lighting could use a bit more contrast for more dramatic effect in this shot. The model's right hand could have used a slight relaxation in her fingers, just to give a more natural feel to her pose. And finally, when a model looks up like this, I always suggest that she opens slightly her lips: it always seems more relaxed and very sexy. Sorry, don't mean to down you dude. I think you did great as it is and I see you have great potential; I wish you well and good luck with improving your skills.

CG
by whiteroom

Comment:
Dude, you'd sure get more points from me if it was not for that big distracting "charles griegg" that is totally screwing up your otherwize very original and well executed shot.

TIME to buy new jewelry
by mischff

Comment:
very nice. I wish the bgr and foreground didn't have that orangish tint- the watch would stand out even more. Intriguing watch. Nice detail. Could use a bit more sharpness I think, and possible another way to present it (maybe change angle and crop larger? I don't know). Nice shot.