Grilled Cheese Step Two
by Twyla

Comment:
It's a cute idea, but it suffers from some technical challenges to make it really come through to the viewer.

1) I would have used deli sliced cheese (or even sliced your own off a loaf of velveeta) to make the cheese itself look more attractive.
2) Clean up the crumbs from the plate.
3) The lighting is poor, get rid of the shadows!
4) Nothing is critically sharp or really in focus. Use focus to draw the viewer to what you want them to see.

I hope these comments help.

Document retrieval
by jpdeloof

Comment:
I have NO idea what this has to do with cheese.

CHEESE, Without warning!
by palmfrodur

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.

Cannibal smile
by esaintpi

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class. Also, it's rather unsettling.

oohhhh...cheese again!!!
by meca

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.

Mazatlan Dancer
by ecorrus

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.

"Most Wonderful Time Of The Year"
by Akasha

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.

Sssssay Cheessssse
by montej75

Comment:
Technically it's a good photo, but it's a tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.

Challenged
by figment

Comment:
Odd.

Can I say fish instead?
by edmeng

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.