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Brothers
09/11/2006 09:10:14 AM
Brothers
by cddogg13

Comment:
** Critique Club **

As you pointed out, the horizon is titled. this can be fixed easily by rotating the picture and cropping. Which software do you use for edits ?

You have some great subjects in the picture, but you didn't capture them well. they occupy lesser area in frame and the viewer is distracted to ther other elements in the picture.

What to do: in this particular picture, you could have gone closer, taken a shot from lower angle to capture the guys with sky as background, you will be able to fill the frame with the boys and have a colorful background...

if you have any questions, feel free to pm me

thanks,
Gaurawa
Power to heaven
09/11/2006 09:06:26 AM
Power to heaven
by Diablito

Comment:
** Critique Club **

from your subject, looks like you want to have the power lines (with the poles may be) to be your subject, but they occupy really small area of the frame. Nearly 40% of the frame here is black with no fixed shape, trees, house etc and nothing particular that adds interest.

for a silhoutte challenge, I would expect a well defined subject in silhoutte and the subject should be what attracts the most attention.

if you have any questions, feel free to pm me

thanks,
Gaurawa
IMG_9290-01.jpg
09/11/2006 08:45:34 AM
IMG_9290-01.jpg
by dwterry

Comment:
well composed and she looks very relaxed, natural pose. and as in other post, great lighting
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IMG_9362-01.jpg
09/11/2006 08:44:41 AM
IMG_9362-01.jpg
by dwterry

Comment:
Another one of my favorites from the collection
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IMG_9278-01.jpg
09/11/2006 08:43:55 AM
IMG_9278-01.jpg
by dwterry

Comment:
one of my favorites as well and yes your lighting rocks..
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IMG_9293-01.jpg
09/11/2006 08:42:31 AM
IMG_9293-01.jpg
by dwterry

Comment:
the hand positions makes it look a bit ackward. may be because she doesn't look that comfortable ?
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My Country
09/11/2006 08:33:19 AM
My Country
by sherpet

Comment:
I would move the tree to the right futher as the branches extend to the the left and lead you to the picture. putting the tree at one third doesn't work as great here.
the right of the tree doesn't add much and is a distraction IMHO
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Blue Tongue Lizard
09/11/2006 08:31:09 AM
Blue Tongue Lizard
by sherpet

Comment:
Again this one has some noise, edges aren't very clean.... as in previous comment, do post exif to check what was the problem
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The Billabong
09/11/2006 08:29:54 AM
The Billabong
by sherpet

Comment:
the colors ( though a bit oversatured) are nice. the photo does lack clarity and details. Its noisy and smudged. Can you post the exif ? I feel it has to do with camera shake or high iso.
the center divide doesn't work for me. the top sky doesn't offer much. you would be better off with croppoing the top part just above the dense clouds...
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Delicacy
08/06/2006 02:40:47 PM
Delicacy
by Djabordjabor

Comment:
** Critique Club **

Greetings!

congrats on a excellent capture and great finish in the challenge.
I don't have much to add. I like the lighting, the water you added and the overall feel. I would have preferably cropped the top some, but that's just a nit pick.

looking forward to more work from you.

cheers,
Gaurawa
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