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| 02/23/2007 05:32:24 AM |
Like Childrenby PeterPicComment: You captured a great expression and a terrific feel of joy with this image. It looks like the focus may be just a bit soft, and the background is a bit too busy. Your depth of field was nicely used, but the distractions are still a bit too much back there. Still, the expression makes the image. |
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| 02/23/2007 05:32:20 AM |
Waitingby sagestudioComment: When I open this one up, my eye is immediately drawn to the bright sky deep into the image. The problem is that there are no other elements that compete with that brightness to pull my eye away. I like your toning, but the image is a bit too dark overall to keep the voter's eye interested in the capture. |
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| 02/23/2007 05:32:16 AM |
Hollywood Blvd.by djbdjComment: I like the idea you started with here, but I think that your execution needed to be stronger. I'd like to see the gentleman standing a bit more off the left border of the frame. It feels cramped as is. I'd also like to see a more contrasting tonal range. With the harsh light here, the image looks a bit too flat. |
| 02/23/2007 05:32:14 AM |
Layersby aznymComment: Its really hard to tell what is going on here. While I really like strong contrast in most images, your darks are a little too dark, while your highlights are nicely lit. This draws the eye to the lit areas of the image without pulling through the entire frame. I also think that you are a bit too centered here. While I am no stickler for the 'rules' of photography, I think offsetting him a bit would have produced a much stronger composition. |
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| 02/23/2007 05:32:01 AM |
Brokenby violinist123Comment: I do get a broken feeling looking at this one. I think you did a nice job meeting the spirit of the challenge, though some may bash you or provide stupid links regarding shooting homeless. I like the composition, but I think it would be better zoomed out just a little bit. I'd also like to see your toning with a bit more contrast. As it is, the image looks just a little flat. |
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| 02/23/2007 05:31:58 AM |
The Watchersby JPRComment: Excellent tonal range. Your whites are well exposed without blowing detail, and your darks are very nice. While I understand that there are limitations when shooting, I think shifting the frame a bit left would have made this one more appealing. With this composition, your subjects are a bit too forced into the center. Still, a very nice capture. |
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| 02/23/2007 05:31:49 AM |
To the big cityby tomzComment: This capture has some terrific elements and the colors all pull each other together nicely. I'd like to see more of her shadow, as it pulls strongly at the viewer's eye to lead it right out of the frame, and I'd like to see a little bit of fill flash on her face to balance out the shadow/highlight that the sun created there. I really, really like how the road pulls my eye deeeeeep into the image and leaves me looking to see what else is back there. |
| 02/23/2007 05:31:42 AM |
The Pedestrianby LalliSigComment: Very nice motion pan and terrific tonal range. I also like the strength of your composition in the capture. About the only thing that I'd like to see changed would be the angle you took the shot. I think if you were just a few inches higher (or taller), keeping the off of that horizontal line would have made this one even better. |
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| 02/23/2007 05:31:36 AM |
Waitingby jaxedComment: This is only the second image that I came across to vote on, but I bet that it will be one of my top few. When it popped up, I almost immediately felt a sense of waiting. I think that you could use a bit more contrast, perhaps a curves adjustment, but the composition is terrific. The position of the girl draws the eye into the image to inspect all the interesting elements you included. Nice toning, but I think I'd like to see the darks just a little darker. |
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| 01/19/2007 09:38:02 AM |
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