Alone In The Dark
by kingskingdom

Comment:
Very well done in a technical sense, but a bit bland. Great for stock, but I want to see a different take here. I'll still score well, as the shot works, but I'm not really feeling it.

Edit to add: I dont really want to sound too harsh, but you've obviously got the technical skill. I want to see more. Maybe I'm just getting jaded :)

Under Construction
by tvsometime

Comment:
My eye goes straight to the worker's vest and helmet, but there's so much texture and pattern throughout that I can't settle on a central subject.

The stroke of emotions
by LadyQuixotic

Comment:
Nice shadow, but I might suggest a different crop. The fist-like thing in the lower right is really distracting.

Placid Darkness
by mailbiswas

Comment:
Nice night scene, but I'm lacking an interesting focal point. Dig a bit deeper into the scene and feature something that tells a story.

Black & Light
by iMichel

Comment:
The cluttered bits kinda ruin this shot for me, but I love the concept. Use this as a starting point for a really cool, and distinctive, technique. I think you're on to something here, it just needs a little refinement.

Light in Darkness
by jlg8402

Comment:
Nicely done. Throw a bit more light on the base to really dazzle em!

Deserted at Dusk
by daewoo826

Comment:
Nice tones, but my eye goes straight to the lamp. I didn't even see the swings for quite some time. Also, I can't say exactly why, but I want to see this shot move... track right... slowly... revealing...something. Wierd.

inner darkness
by apercep

Comment:
I like that you abruptly cut off the chin while letting the forehead fade to black. It works.

Into The Depths
by Hipychik

Comment:
I usually dislike kid-shots, but I can't take anything away here. Great job! It's great as is, but I would consider a partial blue gel or post processing to keep the face/hands/foreground properly colored while giving the legs/background an underwater feel. It might add depth.

Puzzled
by srdanz

Comment:
Very nice! Was it all lit by the, um, under-puzzle source, or is there a second light on the face? I'm guessing the former, but I'm a bit puzzled, um, having trouble working it out.