Again I Go Unnoticed
by incubus

Comment:
Oh I like this one alot. Your focus is so crisp, yet seems soft at the same time. Great eye contact as well. The only thing I would suggest would be to burn the light part of your neck right above your title and maybe your right cheek a little.

make yourself
by incubus

Comment:
I really like the high contrast in this and the frightened look goes well with that. I have never seen the video in question, but Im guessing it would explain the pencil.

Day 2: Bad Omen
by socalsteve

Comment:
This looks like a movie poster thats waiting for the text graphics to be added. You nailed the expression because its that calm hollow look you see in all the killers in the movies.

Message edited by author 2009-01-03 04:56:13.

Implied
by TCGuru

Comment:
This is terrific. Your collar says "sex", but your look is screaming it. Your composition is great as the BG light falloff and the angle of your head and neck create this diagonal line across the image that pleases the eye.

My only suggestion is that a nice sparkling earing could help. One that compliments the collar.

Day 1: Haley and Abbey
by socalsteve

Comment:
You've captured a very cute moment here as the kids obviously look like they are having a good time. Although the lighting looks like direct flash, it does not look overly harsh as it normally does. A little bright on the hat, but you make due with what you have. I like your tight crop as well as it adds to the closeness between the two.

The one suggestion I would give you is to use the burn tool is some areas just to clean it up. Mainly the object in the upper left corner, the wisp of hair in the upper right, and the brighter spots on the boys shirt.

All I Want for Christmas is a Job for the College Graduate
by lectrol

Comment:
That's some really neat construction. Looks kinda spiderman like.
Congratz on the yellow ribbon.

Santa Baybeeee
by Qart

Comment:
Great shot Rudy. Congratz on the red.

...is some mistletoe
by molinski4611

Comment:
Wow, georgeous photo and model. Congratz on your first ribbon.

I love both of your outtakes as well.

Dad and dad....
by Iraklis

Comment:
Congratz on your first ribbon. Well deserved.

Vitamin C
by david_c

Comment:
Very underrated. This deserved a much higher score.