mechanical free fall
by cq107

Comment:
I do like some blurry movement shots, but this one is so blurry I wouldn't have a clue what was in it if I didn't know. It's just not grabbing me. That said, I do like the white circle that's captured so well in the centre.
Kavey

American Classic #2
by Ronin

Comment:
Interesting shot, lots of vibrant colours and shapes. I don't know that the viewpoint is very flattering to the subject, but I doubt flattery was the intention. The arms seem to be a little lost - coming in from strange angles. Perhaps one could have touched the left hip and been more connected to the foreground?
5, Kavey

Poo Moo
by MagsCoyote

Comment:
I find this photo a little crowded - I am not seeing the reasons behind the choices about what has been included in foreground and background. The immediate foreground being out of focus doesn't appeal to me (I appreciate it may be intentional) and the pillows, white hat and magnets are distracting.
I apologise if my comments are discouraging, and am happy to discuss them via PM if you would like to.
Kavey

Stayin' Alive
by sylk

Comment:
Interesting, though the soaked pencil tip just seems so dark I can't focus on anything else, I keep being pulled to that. (Maybe that's the whole point!)
Kavey

Writing draft
by prkemby

Comment:
Nice shadows and the darkness works well. Not keen on the pinkness. Perhaps the paper could have been a stronger diagonal compared to the top horizontal edge?
5, Kavey

family outing
by queen 91

Comment:
Cute! Need more space infront of the car, at least as much as behind since that's the direction it's heading in.
Love the colours of the pencils and erasers (using American talk there, I know how my anglicised "rubbers" might make some DPCers giggle!)
;)
5, Kavey

"You want me to hold what???"
by marvinmartian79

Comment:
Although I am not a huge fan of pet photos, I think the interesting composition, uncluttered background and strong colours (with the limited palette) make this one stand out a little more.
Kavey

Storage
by MrsKro

Comment:
I like the composition, with the position of the ear and the diagonal of the pencil, dividing face from hair.
7, Kavey

Graphite Shadow
by vitsmak

Comment:
Interesting composition and cropping. Feels a little too dark for me, but most of the hand is well lit. Perhaps it's that the pencil seems to be too much in the dark? Just my opinion though.
5, Kavey

ferrule
by just-married

Comment:
Lovely close up of a detail. Wonderful burnished feel to the metal. Seems too red overall for me.
7, Kavey