Quadriped
by Parentx

Comment:
This is strangely compelling - I really like it.

Four of a Kind
by kandyj

Comment:
This is lovely. Looking at the body parts I think I do prefer the skin tones when in colour. It does work in BW though...

Extremities
by lisae

Comment:
Really interesting composition, though lighting a little uneven - too much white on the front of the calf. Seems a little blurred in the hand and foot. Great clean blackground. Do you do yoga? :) On second thoughts, does the leg belong the same person as the shoulder/ arm?

The Foot
by Yomi

Comment:
This is kind of spooky and I have to keep counting to make sure there are only 5 toes! I like it!

Froober's Day
by muckpond

Comment:
Hey Lisa, I like your shower curtain... and the claw foot bath too! Veeery elegant! ;)

Blue Eyed Face
by smellyfish1002

Comment:
Nice portrait though I am not keen on the grey pallor of the skin... I assume you've desaturated reds or something? I think I'd prefer to see this with more life in the skin. I really like the choice of background.

A body : Apart
by Gordon

Comment:
Hello Gordon - this is nice... though you look somewhat uncomfortable! Where are you looking? It seems off to the side?

DeoxyribonucleicWHAT?! The Life of a Student
by Konador

Comment:
:D

at the bottom of the slide
by shutterfly

Comment:
Critique Club


Initial thoughts
Sweet!

Composition/ Content
I think the content is great – my favourite aspect is the way the motion makes her feet look so big – or is she just wearing socks that are too large? :) I like the expression on her face and the motion in her right hand.
Composition wise I don’t like the inclusion of all the netting etc at the top. Playing around with the shot my favourite composition is to crop it at top, left and right – I’ve taken the liberty of having a go and if you’d like to see it just drop me an email.

Background
As above – I’d prefer to focus in on the little girl – with just the bottom lip of the tube showing – and above and to the sides of her only blackness.

Fits The Challenge
Yep!

Your Opinion On The Photo
Like it – it’s fun and engaging.

Join the Traffic
by Azrifel

Comment:
Critique Club


Initial thoughts
Light trails well captured but little else of interest in the frame.

Composition/ Content
This is quite weak for me. Although I do like the way the light trails converge at a point – it doesn’t lead me to anything so there’s a sense of the eye being lead into the shot and then thinking, now what? I

appreciate you wanted to keep the moon in the shot but for me this means that there is just too much blackness overall. I am also distracted by that building at the right hand side.

In terms of composition my favourite crop of this shot is as a square, losing some from the right and the left and the top so that the point of light at the top of the light trails is dead centre.

Background
The black of night is lovely and dark but a little bland – especially when the building on the right is more obvious than that moon up above.

Camera Work - Technical
Looks fine to me!

Digital Processing - Technical
Some of the light trails seem a little jaggy but maybe that’s my screenâ€Â¦

Fits The Challenge
Yes.

Your Opinion On The Photo
Interesting idea but isn̢۪t as strong as it could be.