What Night Is Tonight?
by skasuba

Comment:
nice comp., good subject matter, like the pose. the lighting is a little off though, and so is the focus.

Seductress
by purpleflutterby13

Comment:
interesting angle, not really tack sharp on the face where it needs it. haven't we seen this model before?

Portrait Of PeggySue
by naomik

Comment:
good pose, good subject matter! lighting could be better though. the light on him/here is the same as the wall behind him/her. put your subject in the shade next time, where the light falls nice on them but not on the background.

Seductress
by escapetooz

Comment:
to snapshot like for my taste, the lighting isn't very good and there is something going on with the sweater on the left. looks like it's been blurred maybe?

oui!
by silverfoxx

Comment:
very nice, almost there with the lighting. get that light up a bit higher and it would have been there. the ratio is a little high, lost of details in the blacks on the shadow side of the face, and the hat. nice expression the finger kind of bothers me, I think it's how the light falls on it. overall nice image though, more plus then minus.

Daddy's Little Girl
by athena8

Comment:
nice light direction, a little soft on focus but not too bad. holding detail and the whites and the important blacks. the stroke seems a bit heavy though. nice image all around, think it will do well.

Y&M
by RebTheRebel

Comment:
snapshot feeling, nothing tack sharp, could use a little contrast bump.

Getting Ready
by kashi

Comment:
poor lighting, no seperation on the left of him and no light in his eyes.

My Husband The Crossdresser
by sallyjo1

Comment:
out of focus

"They're spacy what can I say?"
by mistchild2008

Comment:
out of focus...