For How Long Will I Stand?
by mahan92

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

Well sorry, I see you are only 15 so I hope you don´t let this score and finish in the challenge get you down, just get back on the horse and chalk this up to experience, just took a look at your portfolio and it looks promising.

Just have to stop next time and ask yourself, "will other people find this photo interesting?" before submitting. I mean, it´s just a plant, field and blue sky and well, frankly I kindof agree with what JunieMoon had to say.

You also might want to try sharpening after resizing for the challenge, as it is this photo looks kind of out of focus, wich I am sure it wasn´t.

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

Fireflower
by KrisCarpenter

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

Well this shot is kindof cool but still, I have seen enough flower shots to last me a lifetime and I really need something different for me to stay interested. You kindof achieve that thanx to the lighting so definately keep experimenting with that flashlight.

I do like the colors and yes, it kindof does look like it´s on fire so nicely done, this is something I would have voted a 6 I believe, wich to me means above average but still not dropping my jaw to the floor. Think that has mostly to do with the black backround, not sure what I would have wanted instead of black but all I can tell you I think that is what is keeping this shot from dropping my jaw. Perhaps having it in an ashtray on a wooden table? Dunno...

Anyway, focus and lighting are good and that´s pretty much all I can say about the image, keep on experimenting :)

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

Come on baby, light my fire
by Tim

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

Well sorry but I don´t have a whole lot to say about this image, it´s kind of neither good nor bad and had I voted in this challenge I would probably have given this a 4-6 rating and left no comment like the vast majority of the voters did.

There is pretty much nothing wrong with the image, it´s in focus and the framing/composition is not bad but on the other hand there is really nothing I find interesting about it either. There is no interesting colors in it (obviously, duh, but I mean I usually find concert photos more interesting in color), there is nothing really interesting going on and I can´t tell if this is just a friend of yours singing karaoke or if it´s a concert in a blues joint or whatever...

I think you know all this, judging by your portfolio so I´ll just leave it at that :)

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

Uncertainty
by fotojunkie

Comment:
* Double post *

Message edited by author 2007-08-23 10:33:39.

Uncertainty
by fotojunkie

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

Well again I hit one of your shots. Like I said last time I see you know enough about photography I won´t bother commeting on technical issues, wich are pretty much none with this photo. I personally would have preferred it if the entire ear was in the frame cause my eye is drawn to that part of the photo due to your composition but that´s just me.

I also don´t really agree with the camera settings, I would have gone with a 1/640th shutterspeed or even slower and rely on the IS to help out, use a lower iso as even in this web size resolution there is some unneccesary noise in the shot and since you had all that light to play with I don´t agree with the high iso but, again, that´s just my opinion.

Other than that a pretty good shot, well composed with the exception of the ear and lit, deserved the score and placement it got. Good processing as well.

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

Nature Reclaiming Silver Mines
by pmichaud

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

Well first of all, I want to say this shot is pretty good and I had probably given it a 6 if I had voted. That´s a huge compliment cause I really really really detest selective desaturation when it´s done without any apparent reason. It´s almost not noticeable so it´s pretty well done, I didn´t quite get that you selectively desated it at first, just thought the sky looked very odd. I can say for sure I still would have preferred the sky to remain as it should be, blue but that´s maybe just me, have a feeling it cost you somewhat with the voters though, possibly a 6+ score.

Anyway, the shot is nicely composed and got good tones everywhere so it´s well lit and processed too. I personally think the foreground could stand to be a bit darker though and would have darkened it in post processing had I taken this photo but it´s not something that is bothering me, just thought I´d mention it.

The scene is interesting, mostly for that dead tree wich was a good find. All in all I think this shot is above average in the challenge and I see most voters agree with me.

I am sort of surprised you had to reduce noise in this image, I also have a 30D and at iso 100 it´s crispy clean unless you underexpose and then bring up shadows, the shadow areas then have noise in them but that would never be apparent in web resolution.

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

At Hell's Entrance
by Someamateur

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

Well I actually think this shot is kindof cool! I completely disagree with the vote and placement it got in the challenge. I still don´t think it´s bloody brilliant but I would have wanted to see this score about a full point higher or so. These free studies are always tough...

There are several things that could have been done better though. The door for starters... It just looks so ordinary wich I do like, kind of like it´s usually a normal door and then transforms into the door to hell but still, maybe if there was something that was a bit meancing about it that could give it away to the observant. Like a cooler doorknob, that round doorknob looks so dull, if you had a black one with a crooked handle or something that would just have looked more fitting somehow.

I do like the lighting and the placement/feel of the hand. Maybe if you had drawn on the door to make it seem like the hand was being dragged in, drawn like marks so as if the fingernails had carved a path in the door, like the hand was hanging on for dear life?

This shot is promising and I like the idea, hope you don´t let the score get you down, just pay more attention to the details in a photo like this and you should be set :) For what it´s worth, I would probably have given this a 7 if I had voted and I don´t give out many of those in free studies.

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

I am watching you.
by adrianodj

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

Well first off, congrats on your new personal best score, for now at least! I am kindof impressed you got a pretty respectable "wildlife" shot with a p&s camera. However, these photos always come out better if they are taken with a camera with a bigger sensor, like DSLR and a pretty long lens. Why? I feel the biggest fault with this image is the fact that the Owl pretty much totally blends in with the backround and a DSLR and long lens with a big aperture would have solved that problem by just taking the backround totally out of focus.

I basically 100% agree with stevenov and digifotojo´s comments. I do like the desaturated look and use it often and the eyes look pretty cool so I would just say that you need a better camera/lens if you are going to focus on this type of photography in the future :)

I also feel that the even lighting of the shot kindof makes my eyes wander towards the edges of the shot, I think this photo would have benefited with either some slightly increased vignetting or a frame or possibly both.

Other than that, a pretty decent shot but there are just too many bird photos already here at DPC that if you want to do them and score well, you both need perfect technically photos (bird in focus, backround out of focus) and preferrably something extraordinary going on in the shot, don´t know what that could be but preferrably the Owl doing something interesting, not just sitting there.

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

Youth
by permapier

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club :)

First off, to be honest, I would have voted this shot a 4 and just moved on to the next shot without commenting like the vast majority of the voters seemed to do, vote a 4-6 and not comment. I am sorry but I kindof feel this is below average comapred to the vast majority of the photos in this challenge but it´s not really a bad photo either, I probably would have given it a 5 in another challenge (I put higher expectations on photos in free studies) and I thought this shot met the challenge.

The shot is simply what I percieve to be a snapshot of a family member wich has absolutely no meaning to people outside your family but is great to put in the family album. It´s not a bad shot, just not something that I find terribly interesting, this photo doesn´t say anything about the individual other than he appears to have just come out of the pool.

I am somewhat perplexed about the camera settings, especially since you used an lens that allowed you to use up to a full 2.8 aperture. The f11 and shutter of 400 kindof ruin any kind of mood the ambient lighting could have brought to this shot and also leads to the biggest problem I have with the shot, the lighting just coming from the flash.

Had you only used the flash for fill in and used more of the ambient lighting I would have found this shot much more appealing. That could just have been me but I have a feeling most people would agree. There is also those white areas at the bottom of the photo, I assume that´s part of his swimsuit but they just look like blown out/out of focus white areas that don´t really make any sense to me, almost like you had waterdroplets on the lens, I can´t really tell what that is. It´s really pulling my eye towards that area of the photo, I find myself looking towards the bottom and then to his face wich is very distracting.

On the plus side I like the attitude the model is projecting, although that doesn´say much about him like I told you earlier.

Try fixing the lighting, mainly not rely solely on direct flash lighting and use more of the ambient light you have available and maybe have something in the backround that ties in with what the individual is wearing/doing and I bet you would score heaps better.

Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus.

Message edited by author 2007-08-23 09:43:46.

Grazing Through the Early Morning Mists
by AlexSaberi

Comment:

Originally posted by Simms: I gave this a 1 ;)

Big deal, I gave this an 1 AND a 0, beat that sucker :P

Actually I didn´t vote but what the hey...