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| 10/20/2004 04:37:36 PM |
Piled High & Deepby GordonComment: with this point of view, and the fact that the guy is blurry while the books are in sharp relief make me feel as if the books are falling on top of him. Took me quite a while to realize he's asleep on the desk. Try putting him as the focal point and not the books |
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| 10/20/2004 04:36:02 PM |
Teachers Petby kennytComment: the play of colors is not really pleasing to the eye, and the plad behind the apple says "set-up shot". |
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| 10/20/2004 04:31:01 PM |
The 30 second morning dashby peeteComment: I get the "passage of time" theme, but it would work better if the hands on the clock in the background were in varying positions as well - I know that for this excersize it would be imposible to do, but then you need a vantage point where the clock is not in view. |
| 10/20/2004 04:29:30 PM |
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| 10/20/2004 04:28:15 PM |
Midnight oilby hitendraComment: would be better if the light wasn't on the pillow. It makes the shot less believable. Rather have the light source off-camera. |
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| 10/20/2004 04:26:30 PM |
Study languageby monzer55Comment: too semetrical. Try using a different angle, and a directional light rather then an ambiant light. |
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| 10/20/2004 04:25:44 PM |
Student´s glassesby LuxvichComment: gee...the glass reflection seems AWFULLY familiar. good idea, however done before, and the heart detracts from the meaning of the peace. Makes it more a study on the reflection of the glasses then on the fact that it's on a school book. |
| 10/20/2004 04:24:23 PM |
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| 10/20/2004 04:20:28 PM |
Walnut Grove Schoolhouseby vontomComment: took me a second, but I got the inference. Good shot, but It's a bit disapointing. No real depth of focus, as there's no real focal point, and everything is middle of the range in tonality. |
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| 10/20/2004 04:18:17 PM |
Rusted Learningby fstopopenComment: I think this is a great statement, however I would have loved to see deeper shadows. |
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