Words flying in the night
by grivera

Comment:
Focus and bobble make this image difficult for me. It takes a lot of practice to get this type of shot just right.

Mantra
by Rooster

Comment:
The lighting and soft focus hurt this picture. Too bad you could capture the subjects holding hands...that would have tied in with the banner.

Words on Buffalo Bill's grave marker.
by jimsapp

Comment:
I see words, but the picture itself doesn't really tell me a story. Midday shots are difficult enough without filters or underexposing. Maybe some additional elements to the picture would make it more of a photograph and less of a snapshot.

Torn, A Part
by greenfuse

Comment:
I can't tell what is going on with this picture. The image resolution is too low. Even though there are words in the photo, I'm not sure how they relate to the challenge.

An Angel on Earth -- An Angel in Heaven
by beauty_doesnt_pose

Comment:
this could be a nice picture, if it was in focus. not quite sure how it ties into the challenge.

Word
by airatic

Comment:
the flash overwhelms this picture. try alternate light sources

Strike
by cooliak

Comment:
try to avoid cutting off feet and hands; when they're missing, they distract from the rest of the picture. street photography is tough, especially if you don't have permission from your subjects (or if you don't know if they will come after you). also, shooting midday is tough on the lighting. however, if you have permission, you can get some interesting results by underexposing and using a flash.

In Memory of Marlon Brando
by v_prage

Comment:
nice composition, but the focus is a little soft. hard to say if you need a tripod or to adjust your settings.

Ummmm........what do I do now?
by TommyMoe21

Comment:
nice fit for the challenge. the lighting, though, really takes away. you could either underexpose or wait for a different time of day.

Stark/Starck
by lindaq

Comment:
the baseboard distracts (and takes away from the 'starkness'). also, the shadow in the bottom right indicates something else is around...positioning and cropping could give you the image your shooting for.