Nightfall
by Bear_Music

Comment:
Nice colors. I like it lots, one thing, I tried, since you have some great colors in your water, I used selective color and pull them up the beach more. To me it gave it some more pop. Them I just painted the sky back. Just and ideal

summer-marsh-3-IMG_0280.jpg
by Bear_Music

Comment:
I have study some of your pictures and it didn't take me long to figure out what your showing us. It's the stillnees, its about being calm!

As for the critique, even though you have red inside the boat and along the sky, the boat works the sky no. Its the contrast that seem off to me. Since you are breaking alot of rules might as well break them all.
Its got some repeating lines, but no power points, Not saying I don't like the image.

Just a critique.

Mark Thomas Kelsay

angle-jetty-IMG_3215.jpg
by Bear_Music

Comment:
This is one of the photographs that just pulls you into the center of the image, with the diagnols of the rocks, that lead you to the horizon and the clouds suck you to the center as if, it was the end of the world. To me it looks as if it just falls off. I think, the rocks to left show a anchor.

Wish I was sitting there with you. Great stillness.

No really down points for me in this photo, you have set a good mood.

One thing what if you had waited an 1/2 to hour later.And ran longer shuttter lets say 3 to 5 mins, at low iso and used maybe a small amout of light on your rocks (like panning your flashlight back and forth along the rocks.

Of course I know it was outake for 2 sec challenge.

But I think, good things come to those who wait.
I think it need a title also.

Nice shot,
Mark Thomas Kelsay

chatham-bars-fences-dpc-DSC.jpg
by Bear_Music

Comment:
This has nice line quality to it also, diagonals, north shore line both sides of the inlet and the path. Complimentary lines, nice points on the fences, those in the foreground and the first inlet north side, where the water and sand meet and the small rolling hills along the horizon.

Things that I think, I would change...the sky has no really points of interest and the little eye distraction at the top left. Colors are fair but that's all in your taste.

This is my first real critique and I need to practice on someone and I thought you would take it better :-)

Message edited by author 2006-04-04 23:34:07.

vacation05.29.web.jpg
by shutterfly

Comment:
the day is over and came to the past
for the memories of the sea will always last

as the sunset, on it's last fight
birds dance in the final light

Like most of my life unfinished bussiness. Had to write it down look like a good place. Maybe I come back and add when it come to me.

footprint in the sand
by shutterfly

Comment:
Wow that's pretty cool. Guess it does not much to impress me. Not saying it is bad, which this is good.

Light White
by Prime_Time

Comment:
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Message edited by author 2006-03-17 15:10:32.

Duetto
by Rikki

Comment:

Originally posted by Art Roflmao: Needs more paint. ;-)

needs the spurs touch...remeber the red rose? just teasing you.

The Abduction
by DrAchoo

Comment:
Ahhh so close, next time.

spirits
by ursula

Comment:
Now where's mine looks yummy :-) congrats on your red