The Photographer
by graphicfunk

Comment:
I think this is pretty great shot you got here.

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by movieman

Comment:
the nose at this range is rather distacting :-)

Blue Eyes...Green Nose
by DrAchoo

Comment:
Great shot, lovely colors and not center, I think you could have cropped the blurry corner out.

peek-a-boo
by militarygirl10

Comment:
Like the set up. But the hand could have been out of there.

Printemps
by Jutilda

Comment:
Like your ideal, but I think if you would have stuck with one flower maybe the one to her left would have been just fine. Because the yellow and red seem to draw my eyes away from the main subject.

On the edge
by Elmakias

Comment:
Gave me a bit of a laugh, a little on the soft side.

Abby
by woohoopepper

Comment:
I think you have done a wonderful job, great light and color. Like how the earing matches the hair also, so it deserves a good score also. Nice use of the thrids.

Good luck

Childhood revisited
by hanneke

Comment:
Wow what a story you have! But I think you have over done it with the lights, the left hand is blowed way out of the picture. I don't know how close your model was to the background, but have moved them out a few feet and man this would have been much better. Great I deal hope to see more!

Colleen
by danderson107

Comment:
For me the over all image is too busy, the quality of light looks good. As I look around in your image I see things I would change like the shirt maybe a plain color, something more to be a more contrasty to your umbrela, like maybe a stripped shirt. Just to give it some more lines, with the great lines in your umbrela. These are just my thoughts hope you do well. She is very pretty girl. Have a grat day.

Not Arizona Highways?
by f-32

Comment:
Color works for me. Maybe a bit more contrast would help it. Also like the framing of the tree and the road leading in. Great lines.