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| 07/24/2009 07:23:41 PM |
Sun flowerby MelethiaComment: ooh, this is nice Deb, the composition and colours are spot on as is the focus (or lack of it). |
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| 07/24/2009 07:21:01 PM |
Adviceby ZigomarComment: Not only are you a darn good photographer but you have a great vision for seeing a shot I'd often wander past. I didn't really need the translation, I sort of understood, the blur you have here is perfect! |
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| 07/24/2009 07:08:44 PM |
Crown Pointby LeoComment: Excellent capture! Having the sweet spot on the ickle building sets this off well, leading to the distant hills and lovely sky (well, absence of it). I fisrt saw this yesterday and didn't agree with adding more contrast however tonight I have to agree it might look better with a tweak (maybe its the ambient light in the room). |
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| 07/24/2009 07:03:59 PM |
Perplexedby GermaineComment: This is a cool shot, nothing to focus on so I find myself wandering around the image and like Zigomar mentioned there is so much to see. It wasn't until I returned to the image to comment that I spotted the person half hidden behing the lampost. |
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| 07/24/2009 04:57:14 PM |
Tristezzaby Rino63Comment: Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: Rather than being drawn to the texture of the dead flowers I'm distracted by the rather boring wall.
Composition: The central composition isn't doing this image any harm, then again, its not very interesting.
Tecnical: This doesn't 'pop' or have any 'wow' factor for me, exposure is ok but the focus is a little soft in places
Artistic: For me this is rather bland and have much artistic value sorry.
Overall thoughts: I guess you chose this location for the nice little crack? but I think it was the wrong choice. I just glanced at your profile and saw your top 2 submissions are flowers and am sure you agree that they are so much better than this. 5.5 is a good final score I think.
Get in touch if you'd like to discuss further Gennaro. |
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| 07/23/2009 05:54:03 PM |
Stand Outby aprudhommeComment: ok, you say you edited this in the LB style? did you use one of the actions knocking around the web or do it all yourself? As Zigomar says its a valiant attempt but until you actually shoot with a lensbaby even though you may (almost) replicate the LB effect in PP sadly you will miss the LB owners 'rush' when they create the image in camera and of course seeing and capturing the LB blur in realtime.
I see it as a good thing that even though you don't own a LB you want to join in and looking forward to your next shot (try it with a bit of LB bend). Thanks for this, I like it! |
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| 07/23/2009 05:47:29 PM |
Natašaby ZigomarComment: So much more than just a portrait but I'd better stop looking cos I think NataÅ¡a is telling me off with her eyes :( |
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| 07/23/2009 05:44:22 PM |
Dragonheart Oarsby cryanComment: Chris, this is wonderful, did you shoot the entire event with the LB? (probably not lol). This is a great composition, super colour and for me a great shot for advertising the event in the future? |
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| 07/23/2009 05:36:27 PM |
Down from Up from Downby ZigomarComment: This is a little creepy but another great image in a fun set. A little birdy told me we may have a break from the 'Leg my frame' series but I do hope to see it continue soon! In fact I think it would be cool if your next 6 shots went in the Free Studies! |
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| 07/23/2009 05:32:54 PM |
Above the Fenceby LeoComment: If I'm honest I'd just crop this to the right 20% or left 20% and leave the LB blur to do its thing :) Do you feel free of the 'rules' when you shoot into the sun cos I know I do :) |
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