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| 04/01/2004 09:53:50 AM |
Artificial Beautyby ChiquiComment: that's a fine silk rose - it looks quite real. I like your placement and use of black background. the lighting is off somehow as I'd like the flower to pop off the background -- as presented it melts into it. I think there may be a few too many water droplets as these become an element of the shot as opposed to an accent. |
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| 04/01/2004 09:51:14 AM |
Basking in the Warmth of Springby paganiniComment: a lot to like here - the background has an impressionistic feel and sets off your main subject really well. your lighting is great and the color palette of the whole is wonderful. I'd like to see the yellow petals more in focus (dof, wind? may have blurred them a bit too much) |
| 04/01/2004 09:49:00 AM |
Bloom, In Greenby ScottKComment: you've used light well in your composition to create interest in the shadows and the play of greens. it's hard to put into words but it's almost like you've taken an excellent background shot that's waiting for the focal point. |
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| 04/01/2004 09:43:17 AM |
Veins of Lightby K-RobComment: I've tried this type of shot and know it's quite difficult to pull off -- you've got the center point done expertly. I would like to see the sides either cropped or more in focus - this would add to the wow factor imho. The white border is a detractor - theres' no white in your shot so it doesn't add and it's too wide in proportion so it almost becomes an element of your shot instead of the finishing edge. |
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| 04/01/2004 09:40:43 AM |
The Lillyby RasaiComment: I like the spotlight on the orange thing - you've given my eye the focal point you wanted me to have. The surrounding area detracts from your lovely composition, however e.g. the yellow in the upper left. I'd like to see more of the flower but the white thing at the bottom blocks the bottom and leaves the flower with a cut-off feel. I thing the white border adds little to the shot. |
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| 04/01/2004 09:37:28 AM |
Orchidby bormicComment: You've selected a great speciment and really did a fine job placing it in your frame. Border is nicely done. The background is the only detraction I can see - it's so busy that your main subject isn't as isolated from it -- the stick/stem on the left going through your composition couldn't be avoided, I'm sure, but that does detract a bit. |
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| 04/01/2004 09:34:49 AM |
Calla Lilyby edmundtansoComment: Having spent quite a lot of time this month photoing the same subject, I appreciate what you've done here. Excellent use of light/shadow make this a great composition, placement of all the elements of the flower is very well done. High marks from me. Suggestions: no too many - perhaps a bit less black on either to top or bottom to take the flower out of the center? |
| 04/01/2004 09:32:01 AM |
Its a beautiful morningby boyte1Comment: I like your composition and the color palette. If only you could get the sky to cooperate and give you a bit of blue all around the flower... ;) the white doesn't show off the colors as well as the white/blue mix. |
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| 04/01/2004 09:30:04 AM |
Ladybuy & Daffodilby ladpupmoeComment: good dof and composition (tough to get those ladybugs to stay where you ask them to) There is something about the lighting here that's a bit off - it doesn't give your shot that punch it should/could have. |
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| 04/01/2004 09:26:43 AM |
"Red" Buttonsby wetlandComment: Nice use of a different angle for the buttons (hanging), good dof (enough to tell what it is but not distracting - looks like an impressionistic painting). I'd like a bit more light on the red to make them pop a bit - handheld light since it's hard to control the sun ;) The border doesn't add in my opinion as I can't look at the shot without noticing it - turning it into an element and pulling my eye away from your main subject. |
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