Falling
by heida

Comment:
Had a pretty good idea this was yours. Very nice shot.

Message edited by author 2004-08-16 00:15:37.

Footsie
by spydr

Comment:
The best I've seen yet. I really like the selective desaturation and the way you framed this.

Painted Mandala
by Rooster

Comment:
I think this would have been great with a different background

Kick It
by arnit

Comment:
would be better if the back foot wasn't cropped

Mini 'Stang Sits on Bumber of Real 'Stang.
by JoelHSmith

Comment:
I bet if the Mustang was red and your focus was just a tad deeper, so all the car was in focus, this would have scored a point higher. As you already know, DPC voters like purty colors.

Great idea though.

Dragon Eyes
by Jacko

Comment:
What a surprise! You are the macro master. Excellent shot, Jacko.

The idiot that gave this a 2, needs to be fed to the fish.

teeclipse
by dsa157

Comment:
I love this. Adding it to my favorites, so I can come back and get a print or two later.

DPC - Demerging Personality Conflict
by kiwiness

Comment:
Excellent album cover. Congrats!

Hard-Won ...
by GeneralE

Comment:
**Critique Club**

Hi Paul -

Positives:
Original idea using the mouse cable for the tail. The colors contrasting against the black background is a good effect as well.

Possible Improvements:
Definately too much sharpening, as all the edges are pixelated. I also notice what looks to be CA in all metallic surfaces. The crop seems to be a bit off. Maybe rotating just a bit so the trap on the left side is more in the bottom left corner, if that make sense. To me, it just appears it might flow a little better.

Overall I think it was a great idea for the challenge and composed well. I think the biggest problem was that you tried to salvage an out of focus (blurry) shot.

Hope you found the critique helpful.

Cheers!
Chris

Highway Lights
by alonzo4b

Comment:
not suprised where you placed, but I thought it was an interesting shot. You've learned something from your first entry at DPC, don't do abstracts if you want to score high. :)

Good luck in your future challenges.