GO
by colorcarnival

Comment:
Wonderful nostalgia piece. The light in the background gives a ghostly sense of movement, whereas in the foreground creates a path of the car. All items, the board, the car, the house, are all obviously stationary, but the use of light gives a sense of movement to them all. I even love the house/hotel piece, which looks like a faded memory.

Energy vortex
by tunnelvision

Comment:
Interesting piece, my only nitpick is the light looses it's three-dimensionality at the very top- it looks like the vortex bends backwards the 2 loop from the top.

Soccer anyone?
by mbrutus2009

Comment:
I think this would be more interesting, if instead of the goalpost being illuminated, that instead there would be a bouncing light coming from outside the left frame to the goalie, so it looks like the path of a soccer ball being blocked at the last minute.

do not ask what is it
by posthumous

Comment:
If there was a difference of texture (light of grass and then bush/tree) or a play on sharpening focus of an area and defocussing on other areas could help create a more interesting piece. Also, if you have two people in interesting positions, and light them from behind with a stronger light, the shadows on the grass could look like the shadows of monsters creeping in the night.

Uke
by LN13

Comment:
I love how the angle of the lighting gives the bare minimum detail. I can definitely tell it is an uke with the detail given, but the shapes made from the light itself are interesting on their own. The wood portion looks so clean with unbroken slopes that if the guitar strings were wound slightly cleaner then it would have a more modern feel.

Face on fire...
by sinistral_leo

Comment:
Cropping out (not all) some of the blackness to the left of the face would bring more attention to the face itself. It would also disrupt the balance of 50%black, 50%with light, which tends to make the eye focus more on the art piece.

The Mark of Zorro
by GeneralE

Comment:
Using a smaller/less diffued light would give you a more defined Z.

Pathway to Darkness
by giantmike

Comment:
Looks like the light of a ghost motorcycle. Cropping out the bear branches of the right side (distracts from the piece) would make this a pretty awesome post-card of a road trip.

Tipsy
by tvsometime

Comment:
Would be more tipsy if the lights were tipped on either one angle or another, to give a sense of wobblyness.

Garlic and Juicer, 2011
by Bear_Music

Comment:
Nice organic shape on the garlic flame. Slightly more light in the background would give the photo more texture.