Bird House
by PaulG13

Comment:
I think you get the concept. The execution may be a bit overdone as far as the division and ratio of bokeh to subject. Rather than an effective use of bokeh it seems as though this object in the front/right it just in the way of an otherwise ordinary shot of your back yard birdhouse. The hydrangea and branches might be props for another try. I'd like to see you shoot the birdhouse, at sunset or sunrise or with some sort of direct lighting (if the sun never hits is naturally) that casts shadows and highlights the house and use some of those branches as the foreground bokeh, perhaps lit also, so there may be some mystery or more interest.

I read that again today. I apologize for sounding harsh. I am trying to comment on all shots in this challenge. To say what I like and comment on what I think could be improved. I wish more people would do this, as I could certainly use more comments on my shots!

out of focus - out of tune
by damjanev

Comment:
time to tune it then! This makes me want to find my old guitar.

I looked for it in the attic...it's gone. I am going to buy a banjo!

Out and about
by Paul

Comment:
I'd say a good idea shot using the window as a frame and the sign out of focus.

The Green Tunnel
by neilmwilson

Comment:
Beautious! Came back to look and like it even more today. BIG smile!

Tea Time
by giantmike

Comment:
Simple concept. See the depth of field. Feels like something is missing. Not sure what, but something needs strengthened. Perhaps the insinuation of a person leaving or arriving as a shadow or figure in the background.....a hand reaching for the cup.....a bit more lighting on the cup in focus? What do you think? silver spoons?

Dark times for green people
by fridjo

Comment:
I appreciate the subjects, the lack of features and worn clock numbers. I respect the concept and history. I believe I understand the idea. I feel really tired when I look at this. It's like seeing this after a long day. Effective.

The Morning Light
by Judi

Comment:
You are fine where you are little guy! Nice lighting creates the good composition and effects. Nothing critical to say, unless of course I'd like to see more detail in the spider....but that's ok....she can stay where she is!!!!

For the love of music.
by esselphotography

Comment:
Sure! Reminiscent of a teen's Christmas. Like the colors and feeling provoked.

Harley Time
by DCrest01

Comment:
Wouldn't it be cool if it was taken of your speedometer at say....hmmm 125 mph....(on a safe course....straight out in the desert...under controlled environs....safety first...lol)

Tiger
by Stagolee

Comment:
Effective use of bokeh to create the feeling of fear in my chest. I'd cut off the right third of the shot, framing it a little tighter.