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| 11/26/2003 08:46:39 PM |
Weapon of Mass Destructionby e301Comment: Greetings from the Critique Club:
A well done image, with good tones, contrast and lighting. Composition is also very good.
Perhaps the most critical I can be of this image, is simply that of subject: it doesn't stand on it's own. I understand you took it for the challenge, and that may be enough. Beyond that, I'm not sure where it's going: It's not recognizable by most (actually, at first I thought it was a carburetor!), yet its not really an abstract by most definitions (or at least mine: having stronger form or pattern focus than it is a pictoral representation of the object). And from a pure aesthetics, it's probably not something that I would hang on the wall.
But it's a very good capture for what it is and what you were using it for. |
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| 11/26/2003 01:47:34 AM |
Garlicby HavokComment: Very nice close up; good colors and detail. DOF seems right. |
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| 11/26/2003 01:43:04 AM |
Aroma is inspired by natureby rameviComment: Lovely flower; it's a nice, unusual composition, though the angle might be more dynamic I think. You might watch your histogram for overexposure in the future, though I suspect this was a hard flower to photograph! Harder still, it would be nice to have a bit more shadow detail on the leaf. |
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| 11/26/2003 01:40:26 AM |
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| 11/25/2003 05:06:53 PM |
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| 11/25/2003 05:05:29 PM |
America, 2003by muckpondComment: Good social commentary; very accurate propaganda! Perhaps it should be titled: Stop Free Speech in America (as a propaganda piece), or "No Free Speech in America", as a propaganda/commentary. |
| 11/25/2003 05:03:32 PM |
Smoking is Dead Sexy by TechnoShroomComment: Great idea, good dramatic capture. Would have liked to see a cigarette in his mouth. I am sure you tried it and maybe it wouldn't hold. Love the smoke from the skull though. |
| 11/25/2003 05:01:32 PM |
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| 11/25/2003 05:00:18 PM |
Worth it?by arnitComment: Powerful image. Well done. Without the challenge rules it might be nice to have a little less brightness on the end of the syringe. Good luck! |
| 11/25/2003 12:44:23 AM |
When we used to playby oskarComment: Greetings from the Critique Club:
A very nice image! I love the colors, and the concept.
Suggestions: From this position of the shoot, it would have been nice to have enough shadow detail to make out the net (ring) and its attachment to the backboard. Right now we only see part of the net (ring). Similarly, a bit more shadow detail on the wall with the graphiti. Perhaps if you have the new Adobe CS you can try the new shadow detail took on it.
I also would have liked to see a bit more sharpness in the outlines of the wall and bushes, as well as the water in the background.
Regards--Neil |
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