Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by taterbug:
i think if the model were in something brighter/darker, she would stand out more and improve this shot. nice idea. also maybe crop a little off top.

Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by cghubbell:
Too much hair in the face... Hides the facial curves. The subject here is really the metal frame and the girl, yet my eyes are challenged by the background scenery as well. Needs to be composed more selectively.

Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by Cam:
Hey I like it, I am wondering if your really needed the entire sculpture, I would have found it more intesting with a closer crop of the girl, and a partial of the sculpture. But a nice shot and idea.

Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by Allyrellia:
This had more of a snapshotty feel to it, in my opinion. I think perhaps the cleavage shot didn't work quite the way you wanted it to... the idea was good, but I think this would have been much stronger if she'd been wearing a formfitting dark (or white) outfit, been leaning against the pole to show a body profile (curves and lines). I think perhaps this might have looked a bit less like a snapshot had you done B&W.

Still, it was a good idea, and you had a lovely model. :)