Hello Boys
by kingskingdom

Comment:
I really think this is a stunning portrait! Maybe I'm a prude, but I think it might be sexier if we couldn't see through her outfit as much.

18 Marriette & Wes.jpg
by ErikV

Comment:
I like his pose a lot, but her pose seems too stiff. As others have said, there's something missing here. Any outtakes from this session that you can share with us? Her left leg (although we do see her shoe a bit) really looks like it's missing and it distracts me. Looking a bit closer, it seems as if they are on some sort of platform. I think it might work better if they were in the leaves and dirt, not the man-made platform. What story do you have in your mind for them?

Are you there?
by njsabs

Comment:
I absolutely LOVE this! She looks too innocent for that book! I wouldn't change a thing about this. A favorite indeed.

PaW 2010 Week 3.jpg
by Ter

Comment:
While I love the colors and tone here, I am not too drawn to the subject matter. Maybe you could go closer on the round window on the left of your frame. The blue handicap sign and the green one on the bottom right distract me. If you can go back to the same location and take some different shots, I think you'll really end up with something memorable (either of the building's architecture or the seascape), especially with your great eye for colors.

Week-3---Around-the-House---Hummer.jpg
by dtallakson

Comment:
I like the colors of the background as well as the capture of the bird. Wow, what an eye you have.

1970
by Jutilda

Comment:
Perfect. I love the Polaroid action you used.

ff.jpg
by Ivory

Comment:
What a beautiful daughter you have! I love the hair, the one eye hidden, and the shape of her mouth. Maybe show a little bit of her shoulders so she's not totally floating in outer space. But really I don't want to say anything bad about this image because I love it so much.

IMG_3859-800.jpg
by BarbB

Comment:
I like this one the best, then the one to its left. How did you get such great skin tones? Any help for a novice is greatly appreciated. The graininess works well here. What beautiful big eyes.

The ReBirth
by njsabs

Comment:
Amazing! I love everything about it, especially that it is a triptych.

by yanko

Comment:
That is so cool! Can you explain how you did it? I've never seen anything like it before.
The model reminds me of Michael Phelps.