CLOUD
by medinfo2000

Comment:
Your submission is a little small and could be improved by using the full width and height of pixels allowed. I get the reference to twisted with their being no straight lines in the clouds, however it is not a very strong subject for the challenge.

Gracie
by MikeW

Comment:
Sweet little candid moment nicely shot and framed. You got great focus and exposure here. I think the color is a bit off as it looks really blue, especially in the whites of the eyes and in her hair. (Perhaps it is light reflected off the blue sweater but possibly the white balance.) This would transpose well to a high key black and white!

jess
by FourPointX

Comment:
Nice pose and a great smile makes this a wonderful headshot! The color is a little cool having a blue hue to it showing up especially in the whites of her eyes. Technicals are all good as far as focus exposure, etc. I like the catchlights captured in her eyes and you did a nice job with the nose ring showing no particularly overt glare.

Ice Cream Girl
by nickyb

Comment:
Super sharp with great skin tones in the color processing. I like the environmental portrait and think that you could have used a little smaller aperture to get more of that environment to show through.

Sharp Top Reflections
by MinsoPhoto

Comment:
How did this not make the top ten or score 7+??? freakishly undeserved low score here!!!! Unbelievable.

o<8
by Jon_H

Comment:
This is a fun little shot here. I think a few things to note would be the skin color is a little bland and somewhat grey in tone. Try playing with the color curves and possibly increase the midtone contrast to enhance the tones.

bridge
by bvy

Comment:
This kind of reminds me of when I first picked up a camera and shot B&W film for High School Photography class. My first subjects was trash on the ground... especially cigarette butts. Too funny!! Here I think the scene is overly grey and it lacks interest. The reflection doesn't offer much in the way of detail though it does have a decent shape and sort of points you to the trash.

Look at me Mom!!!
by RaeK

Comment:
Timeless image! I can only comment that perhaps cropping of the bottom a little more would create a stronger composition.

bottle tree
by undieyatch

Comment:
Interesting take on the challenge. I have seen yard art like this before. I think you have great DoF and the way the "tree" is leaning helps the composition by bringing the viewer through the shot.

Love is...
by Kelli

Comment:
The classic pose is nicely executed. I like the B&W shot with the dark blacks and greys. One thing I see is the ladies eyes are a little too bright for the scene. Looks like some heavier processing went in to them and they glow slightly.