Chloe
by jomari

Comment:
Lovely shot of your daughter/granddaughter. I think you may want to go around her with a soft brush so that the edges are not as sharp as they are and remove the white halo. Try sharpening the hair if possible and remove the one or two stray hairs. You did a great job with the skin though you might want to slightly whiten the teeth for the hollywood smile. I am sure she would have loved you to take another with a nice smile but I think its a nice candid.

Returning To Class
by gsal

Comment:
love your depth of field here, just enough to single out the girl but you can still make out the story of what is happening in the back ground. Any parent would love to have a shot like this of their kids heading to school. The only thing I can think of that you might want to look at is to crop a bit more of the top of frame off.

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by Ivory

Comment:
Nice shot of a lovely person. My only suggest would be not to cut the image off at the bottom with a straight line perhaps a gradual (uneven) fade focussing down the zip would help in your method. Of course it may be the bottom of frame in which case makes that hard.

The ReBirth
by njsabs

Comment:
Excellent set of shots. I would even consider putting it up on a wall. The thigh to hip area on the left most image looks a tad washed out (or could be the small pic size) maybe the light was not in the best place there to provide some definition.

by yanko

Comment:
Overall I quite like what you have done with this shot. I am assuming that the face and neck are from a photo and everything else was done in photoshop (or heavily post processed). Some more work might be done around the right hand as it looks unnatural that the paint would miss a spot os that shape.

Day Seven
by LMA128

Comment:
I really like how you have captured the moment here. It is a really good shot and good work and getting so much detail in their faces even though it was back lit. Did you use a flash?

The Bishop
by gsal

Comment:
really good shot. There must be something about where you live as you seam to find all these photogenic old men. You may want to go back and rework the eyes as they do seam a little bit dark.

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by Pikkel

Comment:
Interesting take on the subject. I really like the thought you put into this as well as the execution. If I was going to pop this should I would have not done the train tracks as well as it would help the ballet shoe stand out more. Also there are some minor clean up things like the crop on the left hand side, the twigs on the tracks and the hair (?) ties on her wrist.

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by ErikV

Comment:
nice flash portrait. Those speed lights so much better than the on body flash. Maybe some more contrast or a slight colour boost would help the image.

The Streets of New York
by SandyP

Comment:
nice candid shot (even if she did pose) also like the old man perving in the back ground! Nice conversion and a good choice of the boarder. The pram coming into the shot in the back ground is a little bit distracting.