Green desert
by pedrobop

Comment by Ja-9:
this looks like the skin of a basketball or football??? IMO you needed to get much closer for the macro side of this...you focus is excellent

Hummingbirds Meal
by pedrobop

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Initial impression: Nice macro of a sunflower, but doesn't quite scream 'circle'! as the voters here like to see.

Technical: Very nice lighting, great colours, no hotspots, good dof. In terms of compostion, a bit too centred, plays safe in that there is no pov, use of thirds, leading lines etc to add interest.

Artistic: Yes, it basically is circular in shape...but it's not a perfect circle, and that's why you were punished in terms of votes. Even so you only just finished below 5, so it isn't THAT bad! :-)

Overall: Keep shooting. Pay heed to the comments, learn, and keep shooting.

Feel free to PM me with any questions,

Susan

Green desert
by pedrobop

Comment by Lima_to_LA:
Leather of some sort? Perhaps some wild cowboy boots. Good shot.

IMG_0524 versão 2.jpg
by pedrobop

Comment by bvy:
Wonderful and effective framing. The colors are excellent.

IMG_0524 versão 2.jpg
by pedrobop

Comment by jomari:
How colourful it that?! I would like to know a bit more about this scene. Where do kids wear hats like that? Or were they in some sort of show?

Matches garden?
by pedrobop

Comment by vawendy:
I like the lighting on this!

Radiohead
by pedrobop

Comment by jotaga:
Congratulations on your PB!!!
Awesome idea and execution!!
Mandou bem!!!

Radiohead
by pedrobop

Comment by pedrobop:
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Message edited by author 2009-08-19 12:13:23.

Radiohead
by pedrobop

Comment by bcenu:
Good grungy feel with the grain effect. Nice take.

Radiohead
by pedrobop

Comment by reezy:
dig the old boom box, the grain really works for me, best of the group in my opinion, very original, hope yo ribbon, 10