Watch my sugar intake
by johnm

Comment by JC_Homola:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Well, from the looks of this shot it is obviously something you do need to watch! You look like your riding a major sucrose high.. very funny.

But, the shot itself.

While amusing, it is really one that falls into the category of snapshot. All the clutter behind you is very distracting, the light is rather harsh on the, um,, cupcakes ?. I like the composition within the frame of the shot that is quite good.

If you had managed to stick those things over your eyes without the packet and had a plain background this would have been really good.

of course, this is just my opinion.

JC (how's the resolution doing?)

wasted.jpg
by johnm

Comment by Imagineer:
Hey, you should tick the wife off for not recycling!!

Late again
by johnm

Comment by deadd0g:
Great action shot!

Late again
by johnm

Comment by jmsetzler:
the station buzzes with people and sound
as trains go whizzing by
stop for me and take me home
my request please don't deny
the people here are waiting
for the cars with electric feet
take us from this piercing cold
back home into the heat

Home
by johnm

Comment by Fayech:
image seems a bit washed out. would have loved to see the contrast/levels increased to strengthen the interesting image.

Home
by johnm

Comment by jmritz:
Like the brickwork and the composition. I think might be better without the out of focus bird.

Home
by johnm

Comment by Olyuzi:
I think you would have had a very interesting and compelling picture with the texture and diagnals/verticles of the houses if it weren't overexposed. Also, if you would have been able to get a different point of view so that the bottom left roof was out of the picture (maybe you could have zoomed your lens past it) that would improve it as well. Good concept and meets the challenge theme well. Going to give you a 7 even with the flaws mentioned above.

Late again
by johnm

Comment by train:
Must be New Zealand Trains!
I like the effect but its a bit ghoastly Not sure what or if
But I like it

Watch my sugar intake
by johnm

Comment by Konador:
lol, this is great!

Home
by johnm

Comment by Aaron:
I like the POV and the repitition, but it's overall too bright and the sky is overpowering. Metering on the sky or other brigter object would remedy it.