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| 12/31/2008 01:24:23 PM |
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| 12/31/2008 01:42:02 AM |
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| 12/27/2008 05:23:20 AM |
Of Course, its Gorse!by didlessComment by jeger: Greetings from the Critique Club...
I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 5 or 6.
My first thought is I really like the gradation in colour in the background. The layering of the plant is also nice, as it allows us to focus on the one stem/branch since it is sharp compared to the other. The composition might use a little work; I feel as if I want to see more of the plant. Having a little more information on the left would alleviate this. It is a nice image, but has room for improvement.
If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you. |
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| 12/23/2008 09:30:13 PM |
The Great British Traditionby didlessComment by jeger: Greetings from the Critique Club...
I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 6.
My first thought is that I would prefer to see the unopened egg and unfried bacon on the left hand side, as opposed to the right. In western society, we read from left to right, and therefore, if your objects were flipped, it would better follow the "before & after". I like the idea of using depth of field to separate the main subjects from the rest of the scene. Opening up a little wider, if possible, would really help separate the background and the foreground even further. Nice image overall. It makes me want to go get some food.
If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you. |
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| 12/21/2008 11:48:50 AM |
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| 12/19/2008 06:41:30 PM |
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| 12/18/2008 04:06:06 PM |
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| 12/18/2008 10:24:06 AM |
Of Course, its Gorse!by didlessComment by TCGuru: Your light is really very nice. Your focus is either a bit soft or the lens you used is not very good because it has made your focus seem a bit soft. Placement of the main subject, the flower, could be improved, IMO. Perhaps a tad more left. Your colours here are a nice blend... yellow and blue make green... very complimentary. |
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| 12/16/2008 08:36:55 AM |
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| 12/13/2008 08:29:59 PM |
The Great British Traditionby didlessComment by pffree: I'll be having that in the morning (if I ever stop commenting of pictures tonight!). Can't beat an egg and bacon sandwich! Only comment on the picture is it feels a little too crowded. |
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