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drj5Comment by FocusPoint: Hello from critique club :)
Jon, I will be honest as I can be with you. I recognize talent when I see one and you are definitely one of them. Here are the things I like about your work,
1-Ideas
2-Imagination
3-Execution of your imaginations
4-Composition
What else left for you to get ribbons?
1-A better camera (this is a joke, haha), I love 30Ds
I think you need to find better subjects? I don't know. It probably and most likely practice practice practice situation. More photos you take and enter, better you will get, and I tell you one thing, you will get better quicker than others.
For this photo, I think you got 5.0 ( I mean good score) for the fame :\ Don't get me wrong, as I said, close to a perfect image but not too interesting. You also missed a white spot on the middle, should give a bit more angle... DOF is ok, I think I would probably keep the same amount. But frame goes pretty well with the overall photo. I think you got your 0.3 or 0.5 range from the frame. I definitely voted 5 or 6 though.
Keep up the good work; try as much as you can and you will start 6+ s very soon :)
Leo
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