Smile
by landon1013

Comment by angkokweng:
I think the face is a bit over-exposed. There's no tone.

Smile
by landon1013

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Colors seem washed out or artificial somehow (From flash perhaps?). I think there is also a lot of JPEG compression robbing detail. I can especially see some artifacting around her mouth and nose. Your 67k file size indicates you could have used much less compression and gotten much more detail into this. Always save your file as large as possible within challenge limits. (200k for this one.)

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Comment by Denise:
everything's done well, great capture, love the expression, there's a nice sharpness to this, good DOF and nice contrast with the white on blue

Smile
by landon1013

Comment by bspurgeon:
Lovely smile. Maybe adjust the white balance? It's more yellow than warm. Still, an infectious smile.

Smile
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Comment by Rainbow-Coloured-Soul:
Pretty, but the brightness and lighting is overpowering.

Smile
by landon1013

Comment by HeiSch:
Oh man, just lost my lengthy comment for you. So I try to recreat it:
a very nice smile ind deed. You model deserves a little more attention from your side:
Lighting
the flash you used could either be bounced off of some surface like the ceiling or a simple white paper. the flash could also be diffused by having a semitranspararent object between the flash and your model. THis will eliminate the harsh bright areas around the cheek bones, the nose, the teeth and the chin.
Background
the left part adds some environmental relation and supports your picture. the person on the right side though should not be in the frame at all. Your model deserves some more attention by you so the viewer can completely focus on her and not trying to figure out what the other person is doing in the picture.
I guess I was able to recreate the lost comment :)
BTW: focus is dead on, good detail in the hair, catch light in the eyes. THere are strong parts in your shot :)

Smile
by landon1013

Comment by Adamsw216:
I think the direct light is a bit too harsh

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Comment by landon1013:

Originally posted by saintaugust: nice shot. i just wish cell phone guy was coming in from the right of the frame more to balance it out.

I just got done saying that to my friend last night. Lol but hey when someone is only whilling to pose for 5 seconds sometimes you just have to take it. :P

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Comment by saintaugust:
nice shot. i just wish cell phone guy was coming in from the right of the frame more to balance it out.

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Comment by scooter97:
The color of the sky is awesome.