Songtan
by witt34

Comment by Teafran:
A solid image that is crisp, sharp and properly framed and composed - a technical success in every way. From an artistic standpoint, it has significant impact being richly colored with excellant detail. This image would have worked as a black and white as well. A perfect demonstration of the power of properly controlled light and focus. Well done.

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Initial impression: very interesting concept and execution, a refreshing look at crayons. Risks coming across as dull until you really look at it.

Technical: The centred comp works well here as does the plain black b/g; the red stubs do all look like they belong to each crayon. Like the vignetting, helps to draw attention to the middle.

Artistic: The idea behind this shot is what really sells in imho, that the outer packaging is just that and nothing more. Using a circle is perfect because it is the universal symbol of unity. Like that all the colours' labels show too.

Overall a nice, clean shot that carries a message which I hope others latch onto. And looking at your final score and placing, I'd say you did a good job of that. Well done!

Feel free to PM me with any questions.

Susan

Inside, we are all the same.
by witt34

Comment by witt34:
Thanks, I really like how this shot came out.

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by Tnielsen:
Being a white Grandma of an awesome African American / White Grandson I Love it ! ! !

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by Elzbells47:
Very nice!

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by auntpolly:
took me a second but i got it, cool

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by LadyK:
excellent idea. this could be a kids book cover for one of those ute morals stories! what a great idea, you should sooo write it

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by cebuloulou:
I like the vignetting.

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by jdixonsd:
Nicely done!

Inside, we are all the same.
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Comment by taterbug:
Nice lighting, and I like the centered comp here. Good job.