Morris Chapel
by Ja-9

Comment by FocusPoint:
Hello from Critique Club :)

Let me start saying, nice photo... Colors are giving the "wow" thing when I see it first time. Why this photo didn't do better? Let's analyze,

Paint on the building, some of the panels are whiter than others, the top roof is cut off a little. I think there is too much road on the bottom. Colors are good, could be bit sharper and cropped a bit more. Also if you did stepped to your right more, you could get rid of the wire pole top of the first roof.

You did capture the colors though, very bright and nice. If technically be better, you probably could get around 5.5 or 5.8 for this one :/

I checked your photos, for a first challenge, very nice. Mine was around 4 :/ also, I see you are trying to develop a better photographer's eye, just make sure the backgrounds will be jumk free... and keep them tight and clean :) of course I am talking about your photos LOL.

Good luck

Leo

Morris Chapel
by Ja-9

Comment by liberty:
Nice subject...where's that located? LOL! The white balance looks off,(maybe temp). I've entered this church before in a challenge ... I didn't vote, I would have known who's this was and would have had to skip it.

Message edited by author 2008-11-10 23:48:15.

Morris Chapel
by Ja-9

Comment by bob_bobski:
Well I guess you got it about right. Two people with positive crop / composition comments and two not so happy.

:-)

Morris Chapel
by Ja-9

Comment by 3DsArcher:
Nice crop. Lovely contrasting colours

Morris Chapel
by Ja-9

Comment by maxxumg:
seems incomplete somehow

Morris Chapel
by Ja-9

Comment by bob_bobski:
A tiny bit more space on the right hand side would have looked better balanced. However that said the colours and over all feel of the picture looks good.

Morris Chapel
by Ja-9

Comment by KarenNfld:
Nice composition, love those autumn colours.

Touch of Green
by Ja-9

Comment by liberty:
Nice selective desat, cool effect with the lighting and blur.