Here or there?by
prettyshoes1Comment by jadin: Greetings from the Critque Club!
Composition:
Love it! Everything is in balance. The bar, the sign, the road etc all fill their section of the frame without overly imposing on any other part. I picture the choice of this photo not "here or there?" as your title says. But far more significantly "To obey, or rebel". Which is a basic tendancy of human behavior. No one likes to feel repressed, told they can't do something etc. And this photo brings out that on-going inner struggle beautifully.
Lighting:
The lighting is out of your control in this photo, but you captured it well. The colors are bold, and contrast well with each other. Very nicely captured.
Technical:
Your choice of aperture size works well for your photo. The depth of field is spot on where it should be. Leaving the most important foreground in focus, and the trail leading away gradually softened. The photo seems perfectly exposed. I see no overly dark shadows, or overly bright highlights.
Post-production:
Your adjustments were well done. The photo looks very natural. I can't say I'd have done a single thing different. Based on the size of your image I think this is just resized (no cropping). If so very nicely framed. If not, nice choice on cropping. Your border works very well for framing this photo in.
Overall:
This is a great photo. A great idea for this challenge, and honestly should've scored a lot higher. I think your title killed you. For myself I voted this photo a 5, and I think it was the title that made me not impressed. Here or there? Just isn't a compelling choice. Obedience vs law-breaker, and you have a ribboning choice photo. I very strongly recommend giving your titles more thought, or even foregoing a title completely on such a powerful photo.
Keep up the great work. I hope you get a more deserving score next time.