The Prisoner
by Prash

Comment by Prash:
Thank you for the helpful review, CC! Very much appreciated!

This is a great encouragement. Hopefully I keep improving...

The Prisoner
by Prash

Comment by FocusPoint:
Hello from Critique Club :)

Technically, not bad. Nice contrast, I can see about everything without hurting my eyeballs LOL... which is good. Heart on the cup is definitely the attention point. What kicks me is the shadow of the handle. You should of touch that up, get rid of, kill it, painted... just take it out of there.

Composition is good, but I would definitely crop it more to get rid of the shadows on top left corner, and have the cup closer. San Diego is a nice place, I never been there but Melvin from Madagascar thinks so :P

5.4 probably where it should be. Lines are very nice by the way, good capture, nice idea. I actually like the cup in the shadow so it wouldn't create its own shadow... that would probably break the order there.

Overall a very nice improvement for your challenge photos, keep up the good work :)

Leo

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Comment by Inckster:
I like th colored leaves vs the gay

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Comment by poser:
nice

0.0000001 light years ahead
by Prash

Comment by Prash:

Originally posted by ThingFish: I still think I was close Quote "Dried-up booger" Unquote

:-)

0.0000001 light years ahead
by Prash

Comment by ThingFish:
I still think I was close
Quote "Dried-up booger" Unquote

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Comment by robst:
nice contrast of the leaves with the grey.

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Comment by smichener:
interesting capture-6

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Comment by Rino63:
interesting composition

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Comment by aplomb76:
That looks like a really time consuming desaturation job