One of these things is not like the other
by jdennique

Comment by LiamD2005:
Not very well composed. If you filled the frame with the subjects a bit more it might look better.

One of these things is not like the other
by jdennique

Comment by andrewt:
needs more DOF to get at least 1 of the real ducks in focus

Early Evening
by jdennique

Comment by Blackbox:
I think some horizon might have improved the overall composition of your photo.

Lawn Dragon
by jdennique

Comment by Schmeldontino:
the background fence is a little distracting from the cool dragon, but still good detail

Lawn Dragon
by jdennique

Comment by halopes:
It seems a bit out-of-focus. I guess it would also work better if the figure wasn't centered.

Lawn Dragon
by jdennique

Comment by dacrazyrn:
the focus is good, but a little more depth to include the eyes. better composition, ie: non centered and a "something extra" might have helped more.

Lawn Dragon
by jdennique

Comment by kyen:
this is not a bad shot! Perhaps re-adjusting the camera focus, and decide whether or not the dragon should be front and center. If the idea is to invoke the idea of "lawn" this one speaks more to the dragon. Maybe offsetting the dragon to another portion of your frame while still focusing on some portion of the grass could create a stronger connection? Rule of Thirds! You have a creative thought here, keep going with it :)

Lawn Dragon
by jdennique

Comment by dtremain:
You have a fence like mine. But in this shot, it is too distracting - provides a strong horizontal line that slices through the head of the dragon.