Spin the circus top around...
by tolovemoon

Comment by itripn:
focus is a little soft, background seems overexposed, and it's a little too abstract for me

Spring break and nothing to do....
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Comment by Catbird:
Not bad, but the blonde model's scrunched mouth and head at the position that it's in (which gives her a large blob of an undefined neck, jaw, and chin) really makes her look less attractive than I'm sure she is. Perhaps if her head was more forward, it would have provided more definition and depth in the features of her lower face.

Spring break and nothing to do....
by tolovemoon

Comment by metoecus:
Did you try shooting this with a shallower DOF centered on the girl in red?

Spin the circus top around...
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Comment by Shannon:
I had a top exactly like that when I was little! :-)

Spring break and nothing to do....
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Comment by michael_p:
This looks more like bored (left) confused (right), personally I would have stuck with the girl on hte left or just cropped it so that you only see the girl on the left hand side...

Spring break and nothing to do....
by tolovemoon

Comment by gattamarta:
it's a bit out of focus and the espression seems fake...

Spring break and nothing to do....
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Comment by tasha4paws:
not realistic

Spin the circus top around...
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Comment by puma:
Not sure I like the big shadow

Spin the circus top around...
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Comment by ralph:
the shadow really hurts the image

At the end of the day...........
by tolovemoon

Comment by RulerZigzag:
nice sky here! It's always good to see rebuilding and renovation. Enjoy that park!