Final Approach to Circuit City at Dusk
by Everyday Renee

Comment by ccraft:
I really like way you composed this shot. I like that you took it on an angle and turned it into black and white. Very effective.

The Screaming Sun
by Everyday Renee

Comment by lockjawdavis:
Nice shot, but I'd reconsider the title and the border.

Final Approach to Circuit City at Dusk
by Everyday Renee

Comment by Rtwo:
Too dark

Final Approach to Circuit City at Dusk
by Everyday Renee

Comment by brownt:
Really like this, the 'sparkles' on top of some of the chips and transistors is really good, looks like warning signals on your 'buildings'

I do think the whole image looks too dark though. Maybe altering the contrast and brighness, also a little sharpening would have brought out a little more details. Not too sure of the border though, a little thick!

Final Approach to Circuit City at Dusk
by Everyday Renee

Comment by dinn:
Nice tone of color and the ray of light... great shot

The Screaming Sun
by Everyday Renee

Comment by GolferDDS:
I really like the picture. I don't like the title. It takes away from this beautifully suggestive quiet scene.

The Screaming Sun
by Everyday Renee

Comment by rixport:
most people dont want to take the color out of a sunset photo by making it black and withe.. but it works in this shot.. nice shot.. balance and compostion is very nice.. good work..

The Screaming Sun
by Everyday Renee

Comment by AFViper:
I like this photo a lot, the two people in the bottom right really add perspective to the scene. This might be better without the tree coming out of the right side. Overall, this is very good, in my opinion the sky really males this photo stand out.

The Screaming Sun
by Everyday Renee

Comment by Kavey:
A striking image and I love your choice not to be restricted by the rule of thirds - giving the majority of the frame over to that sky really enhances the composition and makes the two silhouettes seem tinier in the vastness. The light from the clouds is wonderful though, in places, a touch too much so, in that it overpowers the beautiful rays filtering out through the clouds. Good move to include those bare foreground branches - it does add something I think. Overall a lovely image! 9

The Screaming Sun
by Everyday Renee

Comment by leskataus:
Wow.