Hands against the wall
by ramevi

Comment by gurlwithapen:
very vibrant!

Hands against the wall
by ramevi

Comment by mar10029:
Crop on the top is too tight... otherwise a great shot..

Hands against the wall
by ramevi

Comment by sabphoto:
Fits challenge=5
Color/lighting=1
DOF/focus=1
Wow factor/uniqueness=0
Attractiveness=1

I kind of like the orange on orange this image has, helps draw attention to the boy more. I'm not sure about his expression though, although I'm sure you didn't have much of a choice on his expression. His black hair really draws you out of the center nicely.

Good luck

Hands against the wall
by ramevi

Comment by Jutilda:
Interesting monochromatic theme. You rarely see that much orange. It suits the challenge. HIs expression seems a tad strained. I'd up the tonality a bit by adjusting curves. Overall - provoking and different.

Little dreamer
by ramevi

Comment by ShutterPug:
** Greetings from the Critique Club **

Focus seems a bit soft, alnmost blurry on face of girl. Seems to have focused on the hand and item being tossed in the air.
Good use of shutter speed to give the illusion of the item floating or stopped in mid-air. Lighting done nicely too in my opinion - really accentuates the gaze in the girls eyes.

Linda

The break
by ramevi

Comment by Jutilda:
I think this is great!! Love the urban feel to it. Or is it rural??? Anyway, the black and white is very mood provoking!! Good one.

The break
by ramevi

Comment by ramevi:

Originally posted by cpanaioti: I like the perspective however I feel it needs more contrast. Using curves and using the white and black point droppers may help in that regard.

Thanks for your help!
How about now..

The break
by ramevi

Comment by cpanaioti:
I like the perspective however I feel it needs more contrast. Using curves and using the white and black point droppers may help in that regard.

Little dreamer
by ramevi

Comment by GolferDDS:
Very cool. Love the expression in her face. The lighting really helps to accent the mood of the picture. Well done.

Little dreamer
by ramevi

Comment by jmlelii:
I'd like to see the child a little more in focus, not sure if thats soft focus or you were just focusing on the ball. Also, im not exactly sure, but her arm looks a little off. A little to straight? it looks photoshopped.