Midage
by ramevi

Comment by oOWonderBreadOo:
*Critique Club*

Well, it looks like everyone's mentioned the one main problem- it's too close, too cropped. Also, the composition is too centered for my taste.

The exposure seems great to me. The eyes are sharp and deep. The lighting is a little harsh- see how shiny it is under the eyes? Some indirect lighting might work better in this instance. Of course it fit the challenge theme great. The comments look quite helpful to me in this instance.
Good luck in future challenges!

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by cars:
Too close--too much shine--needed different lighting

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by echoman:
in a studio like setting? Also, there's something kinda strange about the look.

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by JunieMoon:
The detail is really good on the skin and eyes. As a portrait, I think it would be better with more of the head and shoulders.

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by moniepenny:
The cropping seems a little too tight, would've been nice with the chin in there. Good shot though. : )

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by mecfcosta:
The crop is too tight IMO.

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by szalona:
too tight of a crop in my taste

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by LalliSig:
Bothers me a bit that you have all that forehead in the shot and manage to cut off the chin, it somehow just seems awkward, my suggestion is to keep the chin in the photo when composing like this next time.

Midage
by ramevi

Comment by Dr.Confuser:
Good photo cropped to tightly IMO.

My first Turbo
by ramevi

Comment by arjun_m_e:
gud