Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by tfarrell23:
Recipe for an Onion...I Love Onions....lol...I do.. I can bite them like an apple...I like your try at an abstract...... 5

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by Neuferland:
Ah, a sweet onion perhaps? The colors actually work on this one. Though the blue in the upper right tends to be distracting. But making the colors like you did it could almost be a purple onion! The cropping is well done, the lines draw you from lower right to upper left and it almost makes me want to cry! ;) I'm starting this one at a 6

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by faidoi:
Interesting colors. Beautiful shapes capture off of the onion. Some good looking patterns. Almost like a closeup of a fingerprint.

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by HBunch:
I don't like this at all. Definatly not my cup of tea so to speak. If you hadn't specified what this was, I would not have even guessed it. Secondly, since I now know it's an onion, I wouldn't think it would have these silly colors in it. It might appeal to some, but not to me. Sorry. Also, whatever effect you used, really made it grainy and aweful in the background part in the upper right.

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by jmsetzler:
There's a photo in here somewhere :) This one is a bit too artistic for me.

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by RickDN:
Innovative approach. I like it for what it is, but it isn't a prepared dish, so only a 9

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by alanfreed:
This one might have been more compelling without the effect, although I'm sure you'll get an equal number of people who say "love the effect!" :)

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by LucidLotus:
Wow, very abstract. A different take and look. I like the colors and the way they manifest because of the veins/layers of the onion. I like its uniqueness but find it a bit rough for my personal tastes. Interesting vision. The whites are a bit harsh, not sure if that would've been possible to change. 6

Onion Diced Up (with color)
by Artessa

Comment by Gordon:
Not a huge fan of the obvious manipulation - though onions cut like this make great subjects, red onions in particular.

Nipple Noise
by Artessa

Comment by cpanaioti:
*Critique Club*

General: First impression is of a charcoal drawing.

Composition: The curves lead the viewer in and draw attention to the center of interest. Good use of negative space. Did you try shots where the vertical curve was more to the left or right therefore placing the nipple less central horizontally?

Exposure: For the effect you are presenting the exposure you chose has worked well.

Impact: Impact here is in the use of shape and form. More impact may have been achieved if the image were on the diagonal.

Exploring shape, form and texture is part of photography. Well done.