fork in hell
by bcenu

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that this is quite "in your face".

Technically this is good. There is some dust(?) on the fork that is prominent and I'm unsure the composition is best. The lighting on the fork at the right is a bit dull.

Artistically this is nice and colourful but it's not obvious the fork is hot, it's just orange. I wonder if that was an issue? The blue from the gas is a good tough as it does guide us to the centre of the frame.

In summary a nice shot but it doesn't say "hot" enough.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
by bcenu

Comment by duartix:
Good colors, good pespective.
Didn't like the half framed border nor the extreme cornered vanishing point.

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
by bcenu

Comment by smardaz:
nice choice, the blues in the water and sky look great!

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
by bcenu

Comment by Luci11e:
VERY NICE INDEED

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
by bcenu

Comment by MinsoPhoto:
I like how you have the pier just seem to continue going on into the horizon.

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
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Comment by Cinnamon_Girl:
Great image. I like how the people are 'framed' at the right :)

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
by bcenu

Comment by Citadel:
booo...bad pun. Bad pun. Good picture though. It would be nice to not have the people in the background. I guess since this is basic all you could do is either wait for them to leave or bait them with a hook and hope a shark takes them away.

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
by bcenu

Comment by jaydavis:
Another nicely done one. Definitely shows perspective. I love the composition.

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Comment by justine:
Outstanding dof. Nice entry.

Dissap-pier ~ into ~ the ~ Distance
by bcenu

Comment by oldbimmercoupe:
border detracts. oversaturation doesnt help this one.