mughal lawn
by mshafeeqm

Comment by devparo:
i like ur pic

an eveining
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Comment by Schmeldontino:
i love how orange the water is....slightly awkward moment caught of the guy, but the way the water is shining makes up for it =)

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Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

That looks like fun.

Compositionally, everything in your frame is leading the eyes out of the picture. While that may be your intent, the overall effect is that the viewer may not look at the picture long, and if they do, it tends to feel off-balanced. If the boy was in the lower right corner, and teh gentleman in white was where he is, you would have a strongly balanced shot, I think. As it is, though, the boy is near the edge of the frame, facing out, and the man in white is walking out. Those in the upper right, while not as distinguishable, also look like they are getting ready to run out of the frame as well.

Technically, you have captured the action well. The saturation of the greens is a bit much, to me, and I (personal opinion) think that bringing the greens and yellows down, would make this shot have a much more natural appearance.

Good work and best to you in future challenges.
Karma

mughal lawn
by mshafeeqm

Comment by Schmeldontino:
i love the perspective....nice colors too!

dairymilk
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Comment by tnun:
Most interesting and nicely composed shot. (I guess you meant this one for the rural challenge).

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Comment by tnun:
Very refreshing photo.

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Comment by devparo:
well ifeel very natural n very rear oprtunity to take this kind of picture

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Comment by Maggye:
that's funny, I would have like it more, with the kid more in frame

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Comment by SandyP:
Awwww, this one makes me smile. The very act of him cooling off makes the photo about Hot :) I like it!

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Comment by LadyK:
you should have tried for a close-up of the boy, i like the expression on his face