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| 08/25/2009 08:52:55 PM |
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| 08/25/2009 07:43:38 PM |
Blackby CheerzComment by Ja-9: though I know your title is Black...it is just a bit dark for me...you have all the other elements required...good job |
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| 08/25/2009 03:21:33 PM |
Stone Passageby CheerzComment by Ecce_Signum: Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: At first glance this is a little boring although the shadows and textures work well, quite interesting but nothing that captures my eye.
Composition:Reading your notes you didn't actually make a tunnel or cave however that doesn't bother me too much as your shot leads me into what 'could' be a tunnel, the oof focus right hand stone helps the overal depth of the image for me.
Subject: Whilst I see a tunnel I don't feel as if I'm entering a tunnel if you see what I mean? Yes, you took time to construct something just for the challenge and thats always good in my books, its just that it seems to missing the main focal point.
Technical:Love the colours, a great dof of field and shadows though some of the lighter areas are a little overexposed.
Final thoughts: Overall I think this was worth more than its 4.9 and slipping over a 5 would have been about right for me. A decent shot that lacks any WOW, I wonder what it would have looked like from a lower angle? |
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| 08/25/2009 11:59:47 AM |
Blackby CheerzComment by pedrobop: Well, at first...i think your image is too dark, and for that i can't say exactly what it is. But i think it is some kind of glass with water drops flowing down, and although is too dark, i like the light coming from the bottom, but not the harsh points at the water drops, which will probabbly be bad for a lot of voters here. The focus and the background seems nice too, but again, i think that darkness isn't helping at all and even the border is kind of affected by it.
It seems to be a good idea, the textures seems nice...just try a brighter shot next time, even if you want to create this "Black" mood.
I'm sorry if i was rude in any way. It's just my opinion.
Good luck to you and keep shooting! :D |
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| 08/24/2009 02:08:55 PM |
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| 08/23/2009 12:50:16 AM |
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| 08/22/2009 10:44:17 AM |
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| 08/22/2009 06:13:44 AM |
Sketch!by CheerzComment by Covert_Oddity: Now you just need to pick your colour!
Nice shot, clear and on theme, but doesn't particularly stand out. |
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| 08/21/2009 11:17:09 PM |
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| 08/21/2009 08:13:45 PM |
The "Royal.Shirt.Steamer" - R.S.S TEFALby CheerzComment by bobnospum: Nice composition with the iron pointing towards the corner. Leaving some space for the iron to move into may have added some impact.
The title perhaps has a few too many periods -- Not.Sure.What you were going for :) |
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