first kiss
by zirkovic

Comment by mosesm:
Found the tunnel on the left distracting. Perhaps a tighter crop highlight the two kisser better?

first kiss
by zirkovic

Comment by smoon273:
how sweet! But your models look a bit too old for this to be their first kiss. But I give it a high score because it is a great picture!

first kiss
by zirkovic

Comment by just-married:
For a first kiss there sure isn't any trepidation here! The tones are pretty flat. 5

first kiss
by zirkovic

Comment by hyperfocal:
Need more contrast. Good job.

Look at me.
by zirkovic

Comment by phoensoul:
Great compisition! I love how you used something as foreground which also exists in the background, so that even though it is intentionally out of focus to not distract, it also doesn't distract because we're trying to figure out 'what are those blurry things blocking the view?' Great exposure and I love the tone you used, much richer than the usual sepia. I also love how you managed to arrange the pose so that we can actually see her eyes through her shades, which can be very difficult to do!The only thing that I don't like about this image is the bit of something sticking up above her head on the other side of the railing.

Look at me.
by zirkovic

Comment by monzer55:
Good picture.

Look at me.
by zirkovic

Comment by nikabika7:
Not quite sure where the frame in this one is. Unless it is the blurred posts that are meant to be the frame. Good Try!

Look at me.
by zirkovic

Comment by dwolff:
Just IMO, but the color is what I don't like. Frame feels a bit lopsided.

Look at me.
by zirkovic

Comment by Bud:
Nice photo. This would have benefitted from centering the subject a little better.

Look at me.
by zirkovic

Comment by drz01:
Exelent idea. Great focus and framing.