mk19--WARHOLsmall.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by egamble:
good idea...Wonder what would look like with this effect?

mk15small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by egamble:
Her hand is positioned strangely. I still really like it. Great job again.

Message edited by author 2008-06-15 01:36:04.

mk10small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by egamble:
cute pose...nice background(nice blur)

love the outfit!

mk5small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by egamble:
This one is fantastic. Would be 'magazine' like if the left side of her face didn't have a shadow. (better than anything I have ever done)

Great job

mk4small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by egamble:
she is cute....

I think the background might have too much going on. if it were blurred out this would be one of my fav's of the session.

it is still good.

mk21small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by Sugarpie:
I like this picture, it makes it seem like she is laughing at something someone on the other side of the doorway said

mk14small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by smurfguy:
Cool use of natural back-lighting!

mk9small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by smurfguy:
Sharpness in this one is great, especially in the eyes. Go for this level in all of them.

mk3small.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment by smurfguy:
Nice shot! Careful not to blow the highlights on her face. If you use CS3, try shadow/highlight tool... or selective color adjustment layer, select "whites" and turn up the black a touch.

Message edited by author 2008-06-15 00:43:18.

Something Old...
by zackdezon

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

First off, I love the tight composition of this. While the tower thingy in the background is a bit distracting, in one sense (and it would make a really cool picture without at), in another sense, it adds to the shot by contrasting old/traditional with more modern.

Technically, the focus, exposure, etc. is good. I think the biggest thing noticeable to me is that it seems to be gray overall. It needs some more distinct white/light areas, I think. Admittedly, I am not sure how or where, unless in the conversion process you could get the whitish area on the right a bit brighter.

Overall, a nice shot. It is very graphic and clean.

Best to you in future challenges.
Karama