Battleship Cove
by bobnospum

Comment by bobonacus:
I think one problem is the slanted horizon, also the fact the top of the ship is cut off doesn't help. I think I would like to see the whole ship. You could try lots of different angles maybe, there is nothing hugely wrong with your shot but there is just nothing that really jumps out and in free study the competition is much harder

Triangular Frame - Triangle of Lights
by bobnospum

Comment by kleski:
implied but the foreground distracts

Triangular Frame - Triangle of Lights
by bobnospum

Comment by timwest167:
I love the blue sky in this. Interesting composition too.

Triangular Frame - Triangle of Lights
by bobnospum

Comment by sherpet:
Yes, I see triangles......

Triangular Frame - Triangle of Lights
by bobnospum

Comment by RooDysign:
I get it. But I not too hot about the composition.

Battleship Cove
by bobnospum

Comment by riversong:
Be sure to rotate your horizon as it makes water and ships appear as if they are going down hill. Perfect detail on this battleship.

Battleship Cove
by bobnospum

Comment by Prowler:
I like the idea, but maybe find a way to get just the rocks and not all the scrubby brush on top of it in the shot. Different angle perhaps? Battleships are so immense, having the scrubby bush interferring with much of the central ship takes away from the battleship too much.

Battleship Cove
by bobnospum

Comment by JulietNN:
very intresting shot, the ducks almost lend itself to this shot by saying, peace and war. nice colours the ship does appear to be sinking though as teh front bit is a lot lower than the back end, maybe a tiny skew is needed?

Stoneham Theatre, circa 1917
by bobnospum

Comment by choltmeier:
Seems like it could use some more contrast to bring out the details in the bricks, lights and tree branches. I also wish I could see the sidewalk to ground me a bit.

Stoneham Theatre, circa 1917
by bobnospum

Comment by IreneM:
Looks like an ancient film photo. Cool.