last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by ytshuva:

Originally posted by FrankRobinson: Hi Kobi - welcome to the Critique Zone! My first impressions - this is a really nice shot. I have always been a fan of those who can get light to work for them 'photo-graphy' and you definitely have here. But it is a shame about the background. Why couldn't the screen manufacturer have made it a little taller? Technically, I would have been interested to see this taken at f2.8 just to try and blur out those pot plants. Other than that, the focus is perfect and of course the lighting is what makes it. Artistically, I would wonder how much to ascribe to you and how much to your model, but looking at some of your other work, either you are very lucky or you have a way of getting your models to give you what you need! This is really natural with a very nicely balanced composition. I like it, like I said, it's just a shame that screen wasn't a tiny bit higher! Happy hunting, Frank.

THX a lot frank! this is DPC at its best for me! I learned a lot here.

last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by FrankRobinson:
Hi Kobi - welcome to the Critique Zone!

My first impressions - this is a really nice shot. I have always been a fan of those who can get light to work for them 'photo-graphy' and you definitely have here. But it is a shame about the background. Why couldn't the screen manufacturer have made it a little taller?

Technically, I would have been interested to see this taken at f2.8 just to try and blur out those pot plants. Other than that, the focus is perfect and of course the lighting is what makes it.

Artistically, I would wonder how much to ascribe to you and how much to your model, but looking at some of your other work, either you are very lucky or you have a way of getting your models to give you what you need! This is really natural with a very nicely balanced composition.

I like it, like I said, it's just a shame that screen wasn't a tiny bit higher!

Happy hunting,

Frank.

last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by BubBroad:
I think the background ruins this shot.

last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by Teafran:
Very interesting concept. I like the contrasts with the slight tint. Nice focus too. Well done. Good image and it should be top ten at least.

last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by bmartuch:
Nice job on this shot. I like the color tone.

last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by Tiny:
There are a few blind shots here,this one works very well in my view.7.

last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by Ammie:
Interesting take on the challenge. Not crazy about the colour but certainly different.

last day at the office
by ytshuva

Comment by tanguera:
The lines!!!!!

Her eyes twinkled like stars
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Comment by nam:
Lovely focus and such a very pretty model. Beautiful eyes! Congratulations on the nice finish.

Her eyes twinkled like stars
by ytshuva

Comment by tvsometime:
What a pair. So well executed. Will we see a variation in smile? bumping to 7