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Comment by Ken:
Really cute portrait, but to me it's more of a portrait than demonstrating "straight".

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Comment by andrewt:
Excellent potrait , would have liked the background just a tad darker to give a little more seperation , bumping to an 8

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Comment by Melethia:
Posed obviously, but very well done and effective.

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Comment by BigJohnson:
Great idea and nice capture. I wish his out of focus right hand wasn't there though. 8

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Comment by byinnerhero:
Very clever! Congrats!

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Comment by Ammie:
Beautiful kid and picture but to fit the challenge the bars should have been in focus, not the beautiful young lady.

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Comment by ASTONishing:
I think I would have choosen to focus on the lines and left the girl OOF.

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Comment by JulietNN:
Hi from the Critique Club

You asked for this shot to have a comment from a member of the Critique Club.

I really liked this shot and gave it high score in the challenge

This reeks of 1940-50's with the lipstick, very simple and clean.

There is not a lot I can say that could improve this shot, maybe, just maybe saturating the eyes and a tiny bit of dodge and burn before turning this to black and white would have given the eyes some more depth.

But this is a fabulous shot

maria
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Comment by tnun:
Love the unspoiled classic feel to this.

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Comment by bucket:
wow this is beautiful...classic!