Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by quiche:
Work on the color cast. This is WAY too yellow. It also has a distracting background and harsh shadows.

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by efrazier:
The lighting needs to be brighter..the jar on the far right is hard to read/see.

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by signal2noise:
The white balance seems to be way off in this shot and it is a bit too cluttered. I studied it trying to see if you were attempting to tell a story with this setup - different breads/empty sugar free jars/caps on - caps off, etc. But wasn't able to make out anything.

Mmmm, I do love black raspberry jam though.

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by milessherrill:
love the lighting

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by brownguy:
Fix your white balance please. And use all full or all empty jars if you're going to have them in

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by laurielounge:
I don't like the cast here

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by Camabs:
This is a nicely composed still life of bread and the texture of the bread stands out well. It has however some problems. First of all, your white balance is off, the light is too warm. You can and should correct for this, either in-camera or in PP. Second, there are several distracting elements in the background. With a still life, try to keep your background as neutral as possible. Third, I would have liked a slightly lower POV on this one, to give it a more classic still life look.

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by got2bgutsy:
the lighting killed this shot, but good idea with the jelly

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by Eisbaer:
very nice composition, i would have loved for the color to be less yellow

Combo Platter
by Matten25

Comment by HeiSch:
my favorite is the one in the middle :)
the WN seems to be way off. Too much yellowish tone.